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letter-request Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to ask for a fortnight work off from the 1st to the 15th of May. The reason for this leave is that I plan to use this two weeks to finish my master’s degree in computer science. As you know, I have focused on my course of computer science for one year, and now the obstacle between my dream and reality is a graduating essay. So I desperately need to use my annual leave to polish and finalize my essay. In terms of my job, I have spoken to my colleagues, and it seems that either Tom or Jerry would be best placed to cover my project commitments while I am away. I will leave detailed instruction on my desk. Moreover, I will continue to check my email box, and keep be online during the working time every day. As a result, no important tasks would be delayed. As long as a master’s degree is awarded to me, I will commence rebuilding our website immediately. What I had learned during the course of master’s degree is valuable to improve the appearance of our company’s website. In addition, I plan to set up a network division as well. Both of these definitely will contribute a great deal of revenue to our annual aim indirectly. I hope my request dose not cause you any inconvenience. Yours sincerely,

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to ask for a fortnight off  work off from the 1st to the 15th of May.

The reason for this leave is that I plan to use this two weeks to finish my master’s degree in computer science. As you know, I have focused on my course of computer science for one/a year, and now the only obstacle between my dream and reality (this is a little overblown) is a graduating/final essay. So I desperately need to use my annual leave to polish and finalize my essay.

In terms of my job, I have spoken to my colleagues, and it seems that either Tom or Jerry would be best placed to cover my project commitments while I am away. I will leave detailed instruction on my desk. Moreover, I will continue to check my email inbox, and keep be remain online during work hours/the working time every day. As a result, no important tasks will would be delayed.

As long as Assuming a master’s degree is awarded to me, I will commence rebuilding our website immediately. What I had have learned during the course of master’s degree course/study is valuable to improve the appearance of our company’s website. In addition, I plan to set up a network division as well. Both of these will definitely will contribute a great deal of revenue to our annual aim target, indirectly. Will surely make indirect contribution to ...

I hope my request does not cause you any inconvenience.

Yours sincerely,


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Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to ask for a fortnight work off off work from the 1st to the 15th of May. The change in word order is because you're asking for a fortnight of off-days from work. Fortnight also isn't used very much in my experience, but since you also give the dates it's okay.

The reason for this leave is that I plan to use this two weeks to finish my master’s degree in computer science. As you know, I have focused on my course of computer science computer science course for one year, and now the obstacle between my dream and reality is a graduating essay. So I desperately need to use my annual leave to polish and finalize my essay.

In terms of my job, I have spoken to my colleagues, and it seems that either Tom or Jerry would be best placed to cover my project commitments while I am away. I will leave detailed instruction on my desk. Moreover, I will continue to check my email box, and keep be remain online during the working time every day. As a result, no important tasks would be delayed.

As long soon as a master’s degree is awarded to me, I will commence rebuilding our website immediately. What I had will have learned during the course of my master’s degree is valuable to improve the appearance of our company’s website. In addition, I plan to set up a network division as well. Both of these definitely will contribute a great deal of revenue to our annual aim indirectly.

I hope my request dose does not cause you any inconvenience.

Yours sincerely,


Apart from those corrections, this is a pretty well-done formal letter!

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