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Loneliness I think if we try to name the main source of people’s deprivation it will be loneliness. In this case by “Loneliness” should be understood not only its common forms like forced loneliness of Robinson Crusoe or celibacy of 20 million Russian in the middle of XIX century and of every ninth US citizen. The loneliness has many different ways. Man could be alone, even when he is with someone, when you follow the social norms, he is alone in the family, in the crowd, in the church, in the party, in the club, at work. In the old times people said: “For a lonely man anywhere is a desert” In turn, loneliness has its own reason: Persistent ignorance ourselves and others, the absence of the clear picture about inner world and the possibilities of contact with the inner worlds of others. “Who are we? The dolls on the strings? And a puppeteer is our firmament?” - had asked Omar Khayyam, and haven’t taken the liberty to answer this question. Indeed, we know the essence of our nature so badly, that we feel ourselves as helpless toys in the hands of fate, but fate is blind and it lead us, also blind, through the bumps and pits of life without purpose and meaning. That’s why the man chooses solitary way. In the darkness, where you cannot see, you do much less mistakes – this is logic of the blind.

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Loneliness

I think if we try to name the main source of people’s deprivation it will be "loneliness". In this case by “Loneliness” should be understood not only its common forms like the enforced loneliness of Robinson Crusoe or the celibacy of 20 million Russians in the middle of XIX century and of every ninth US citizen. Lloneliness has many different forms. Man can be alone, even when he is with someone, when he follows the social norms, he is alone in the family, in the crowd, in the church, at the party, in the club, at work. In olden days people said: “For the lonely man anywhere is a desert”

In turn, loneliness has its own grounds: continually ignoring ourselves and others, the absence of the clear picture of our inner world and the possibilities of contact with the inner worlds of others.
“Who are we? Dolls on strings? And a puppeteer is our firmament?” - asks Omar Khayyam, and had not taken the liberty to answer his question. Indeed, we know the essence of our nature so little, that we feel ourselves as helpless toys in the hands of fate, but fate is blind and leads us, also blind, through the bumps and pits of life without purpose and meaning. That’s why man chooses the solitary way. In the darkness, where you cannot see, you make far fewer mistakes – this is logic of the blind.

very well written!

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You have a very poetic way of using English, I like it! I find city life can be anonymous and lonely at times, but equally if I lived in a village I might resent the fact everyone knew all about my business and I guess they can be gossipy places. It does seem a shame though that there are 12 apartments in my building and there are only two people who know me well enough to talk to, I never see the others.

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