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Help to correct my mistakes in the recommendation letter below. Thanks in advance Dear LeadershipCommittee, I had the pleasure of working with Monserrat for over two years while she worked as a Procurement Manager one of the best financial institutions in Peru. Monserrat started working as Procurement Analyst but she learned quickly to handle all the responsibilities and got up to speed on tools and skills so she became expert soon on the procurement process. With only one year in the area she was promoted to take a position of a five years’ experience required. During the time we worked together, Monserrat was always very professional and a hard working woman who developed excellent communication skills to negotiate with our business suppliers. She was always a smart and very organized worker and highly self-motivated in her job. From my point of view, Ms. Velazquez was one of the most value members of the team by creating an excellent environment and keeping her team motivated to achieve the objectives. Her dedication and commitment to work is unquestionable. I recommend Monserrat without reservations. I am sure that if she enrolls into the Leadership program she will do her best and once she returns to Perú she will apply all the knowledge learned there in order to help our community. Please contact me if you have any further question.

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Help to correct my mistakes in the recommendation letter below. Thanks in advance

Dear Leadership Committee,

I had the pleasure of working with Monserrat {consider using Ms. Velazquez instead of Monserrat} for over two years while she worked as a Procurement Manager at one of the best financial institutions in Peru. Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} started working as a Procurement Analyst. but she learned quickly to She handled all the responsibilities {of the position}, and got up to speed quickly on the tools, and mastered skills sho and she quickly became expert soon on the procurement process. With only one year in the area, she was promoted to take a position of a that required five years’ experience required.
During the time we worked together, Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} was always very professional, and a hard worker. woman who She developed excellent communication skills to negotiate with our business suppliers. She was always a smart and very organized worker and highly self-motivated in her job. From my point of view {In my opinion}, Ms. Velazquez was one of the most value members of the team. by She helped create an excellent {work}environment and kept her team motivated to achieve the its objectives. Her dedication and commitment to work is unquestionable.
I recommend Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} without reservation. I am sure that if she enrolls into in the Leadership Program, she will do her best and once when she returns to Perú, she will apply all the knowledge she has learned there {in the program} in order to help our community. Please contact me if you have any further questions.


Very well written! I hope she gets accepted to the program!

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