My hobby My hobby is origami. Origami is an art of paper folding. When I was at junior school, my teacher showed students how to fold a sheet of paper to make a figure like a parrot or a crane. I rea

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My hobby My hobby is origami. Origami is an art of paper folding. When I was at junior school, my teacher showed students how to fold a sheet of paper to make a figure like a parrot or a crane. I really liked it and I asked the teacher how to make any other figure. She told me to get a book about origami in the library. The book contained a lot of instuctions of how to make different figures. I got the book and made every figure in it. Then I thought that it was too easy for me, so I asked my parents to buy me another book about origami. There were a lot more complex figures therein, but I have made all of it's figures and I enjoyed it a lot. After that I was bored and stopped making figures for some time. Later, when I was at high school, I got an access to the internet, so I searched for new, more complicated figures. I found an instruction of how to make a pegasus. I spent a lot of time to make it but I was unable to finish it because notebook paper that I used was too thick. I tried to find thinner paper, but what I discovered was that I have to make it on my own from aluminium foil and very thin paper. It was too hard for me so I gave up. The pegasus is the last figure that I've ever made.

12 de sep. de 2018 9:19

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My hobby

My hobby is origami.
Origami is an art of paper folding. When I was at junior school, my teacher showed students how to fold a sheet of paper to make a figure like a parrot or a crane. I really liked it and I asked the teacher how to make <strike>any</strike> other figures. She told me to get a book about origami in the library.
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Later, when I was at high school, I got <strike>an</strike> access to the internet so I searched for new, more complicated figures. I found <strike>an</strike> instructions on <strike>of</strike> how to make a Pegasus. I spend a lot of time making <strike>ot make</strike> it but I was unable to finish it because the notebook paper that I used was too thick. I tried to find thinner paper, but <strike>what</strike> I discovered <strike>was</strike> that I had <strike>have</strike> to make it on my own from aluminium foil and very thin paper. It was too hard for me so I gave up. The Pegasus was <strike>is</strike> the last figure that I've ever made.

Hi! On the whole you have written this clearly and it is understandable. I have corrected your tense in places so it all reads in 'past tense' and also so it sounds like a native English speaker has written it. It's a shame you didn't carry on with your origami, it sounds like you were very good!

Kind Regards

Pauline Snowdon - italki teacher.

Writing in bold doesn't make sense. Did you mean to add something else here? If so add it in, if not then just delete it.

12 de septiembre de 2018

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