Hello! My name is Marina. I am live in not great city a small town in the central part of Russia. It is one of the oldest town of Russia there.
I'm learning English because it's interesting, and facility allows us to meet new friends and to get to know in touch with different cultures of other country. Moreover, having knowledge of the in that language give might provide me new means in career opportunities.

Привет, Марина. Спасибо за дружбу! Я не учититель по английский, а буду исправлять и помогать как можно больше. Я бы писал твоё представление так:

Hello! My name is Marina. I live in a small city in central Russia. It is one of the oldest cities in Russia. I am learning English because it's interesting, it helps me meet new friends, and learn about another culture. I'm also studying English because it will help me advance my career.