B2 Practicing Writing

Hi!
I am taking part in an English challenge, This week, I have to write a text. It is never too late. Here is the text. I need some feedback about my skills. Thank you for you help.

Motivation letter for the project

My name is Lena and I applied for a volunteer project in Kamchatka. For the last 2 last years, I have traveled in Russia by train. It was an amazing experience and I realized how big is Russia is. My favorite place is Baikal, it is a magical place where you are completely disconnected from the rest of the world and feel connected more with nature. So, after 2 years in a row I want to move and Kamchatka look like my dream.

I grew up in a beautiful place close to the biggest lake in Belarus and I have always has spent a lot of time in the nature, I took part in competitions in the forest,  I went on tracks in the mountains (not really difficult ones) and I love to take care of nature. Now, I want to try a volunteering. In my opinion, it is a deliberate way to spend time during your holidays and to see what you otherwise would have never have had a chance to see as a normal tourist.

A few words about my abilities. I am working as a financial auditor, which could sound like it is not really applicable for such kinds of projects, but if you think about any grants, I could be helpful also. Moreover, for 5 years I took part in an organisation for young people around Europe, where I have organized events around Belarus and Russia, so I could be a guide or a kind of event-organizer. And I am always ready for any tasks you need (as long as it is not dangerous for me).

Still I have time to discover and be helpful. I am ready to work on challenging and interesting projects.
See you in Kamchatka

B2 Practicing Writing

Hi!
I am taking part in English challenge, This week I have to write a text. It is never too late. Here is the text. I need a small feedback about my skills. Thank you for your help.

Motivation letter for a project

My name is Lena and I am applying for a volunteer project in Kamchatka. For the 2 last years I have traveled all over Russia by train. It was  an amazing experience and I realized how big Russia is. My favorite place is Baikal, it is a magical place where you are completely disconnected from the rest of the world and feel  a better connection with nature. So, after 2 years in a row I want to change location and Kamchatka looks like my dream.

I grew up in a beautiful place close to the biggest lake in Belarus and have always spent a lot of time in the nature, I took part in competitions in forest, tracks in mountains (not really difficult) and I love to take care about the nature. Now I want to try volunteering. In my opinion it is a deliberate way to spend time during your holidays and to see what you have never had the chance to see as an ordinary  tourist.

A couple of words about my abilities. I am working as a financial auditor, which could sound not really applicable for a such kind of project, but if you think about any grants, I could be helpful also. Moreover, for 5 years I took part in organization for young people all around Europe, where I have organized events around Belarus and Russia, so I could be guide or a kind of event-organizer. I am always ready for any tasks you need (if it is not dangerous for me).

Still I have time to discover and be helpful. I am ready for work, challenges and interesting projects.
See you in Kamchatka