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I have recently started to really enjoy my dance group activities at university. I have always liked dancing. When I was in high school, I joined the dance club, and I loved it very much. The seniors and classmates were all kind, and the atmosphere was really fun. I wanted to dance every day, and I felt very happy being in the club.  After entering university, I joined a dance group again. At first, it was not easy for me because I'm a shy person. I could not make many friends at the beginning, and I often felt nervous. Sometimes, I even worried about whether I would enjoy the practices or fit in with everyone. However, after spending more time with other members, I gradually got to know many people. I became friends with both seniors and juniors, and I started to feel comfortable in the group. Now, every practice is really fun, and I look forward to it.  In addition, recently, I turned 20, so I can drink alcohol legally in Japan. This has made the social events after practice even more enjoyable. I hope to get closer to everyone and make even more good memories in the future. Being part of this group has made my university life much happier.
24 de nov. de 2025 6:57
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I have recently started really enjoying my dance group activities at university. I have always liked dancing. When I was in high school, I joined the dance club, and I loved it very much. The seniors and classmates were all kind, and the atmosphere was really fun. I wanted to dance every day, and It made me very happy being in the club. After entering university, I joined another dance group. At first, it was not easy for me because I'm a shy person. I could not make as many friends in the beginning, and I often felt nervous. Sometimes, I would worry about whether or not I would enjoy the practices or fit in with everyone. However, after spending more time with the other members, I gradually got to know many people. I became friends with both seniors and juniors, and I started feeling comfortable in the group. Now, every practice is really fun, and I look forward to it. In addition, I recently turned 20, so I can drink alcohol legally in Japan. This has made the social events after practice even more enjoyable. I hope to get closer to everyone and make even more good memories in the future. Being part of this group has made my university life much happier.
Beautiful piece, well articulated..pay more attention to word forms and placement. Try creating fuller sentences too next time. Otherwise keep at it you doin well.
25 de noviembre de 2025
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