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Yesterday, I forgot to go joggings and only when I closed the door, did I remember about the thing I forgot. Because I committed to go joggings every day for at least 3km or I will pay fine, I just thought about discipline and I went out at 10 p.m. I am so grateful I am in a group and it help me improve myself.
31 de mar. de 2024 0:49
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Yesterday I forgot to go jogging and only after I closed the door behind me did I realize I had neglected to do something. Because I have committed myself to jog 3km every day or to pay a fine, I just thought about discipline and I went out at 10 p.m. I am so grateful to be in a group that helps me to improve myself.
I do not understand the clause "I just thought about discipline and I went out at 10 p.m." Could you explain what you mean to say?
Your first sentence uses the words "forgot", "remember", and "forgot" again. I reduced the repetition by using different words.
31 de marzo de 2024
Yesterday, I forgot to go jogging and only when I closed the door did I remember about the things I forgot. Since I committed to run at least 3 km every day or/otherwise I would have to pay a fine, I just thought about discipline and I went out running at 10 p.m. I am so grateful to be in a group and it helps me improve.
31 de marzo de 2024
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Chino (mandarín), Inglés, Francés, Japonés, Coreano, Vietnamita
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