Short tip: Use “cannot” or “can’t” for negative ability. Dates in British English use day-month format without “th” or “rd” in formal writing. Use polite phrases like “please let me know” and “if you suggest” to sound courteous. Why these changes? - “Cannot find” is clearer and more formal than “don’t see.” / - “Destination” fits better than “place” in travel context. / - Date format follows British style. / - “I am” instead of “I’m” sounds a bit more formal here. / - Added punctuation and capital letters for sentence clarity.