Plese correct me:

I would tell you about my first bus trip to Switzerland. It was in early autumn, in September after I left hospital. At that moment I was pregnant, and I want to feel some good emotions after hospital. Our trip began at the bus station of Łódź, where we walk away and take the road. Our trip went for 10 hours and at 8 a.m. we were in Switzerland. There was gorgeous weather, so sunny and warm. The first location was the waterfall. That location was super atmosphere with crazy energy of water. I felt wonderful in that clean air and the smell of water. The next station was the Old Town of Zurich, the capital of Switzerland. The rich, old city, where everyone feels that atmosphere.

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Plese correct me:

I would tell you about my first bus trip to Switzerland. It was in early autumn, in September after I left hospital. At that moment I was pregnant, and I want to feel some good emotions after hospital. Our trip began at the bus station of Łódź, where we walk away and take the road. Our trip went for 10 hours and at 8 a.m. we were in Switzerland. There was gorgeous weather, so sunny and warm. The first location was the waterfall. That  location was super atmosphere with crazy energy of water. I felt wonderful in that clean air and the smell of water. The next station was the Old Town of Zurich, the capital of Switzerland. The rich, old city, where everyone feels that atmosphere.

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Hi Lyobov, I hope your well!

I would #like to tell you about my first bus trip to Switzerland. It was in early autumn, in September after #I had left the hospital. At that moment I was pregnant, and I #wanted to feel some good emotions after #been in hospital. Our trip began at the bus station of Łódź, #Where we walked away and #made our way along the road. Our trip #lasted for for 10 hours and at 8 a.m. we were in Switzerland. There was gorgeous weather, so sunny and warm. The first location was the waterfall. That  location was a #super #atmosphere with #a crazy energy of water. I felt wonderful in that clean air and the smell of water. The next station was the Old Town of Zurich, the capital of Switzerland. The rich, old city, where everyone feels that atmosphere.

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