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Today, I played futsal with my friends. We had a lot of fun and played several exciting games. It was very hot, so we took breaks and drank plenty of water. I scored one goal, and everyone cheered for me. After playing, I felt tired but happy because I got some good exercise and enjoyed spending time with my friends.
19 de jul. de 2026 10:22
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Today, I played futsal with my friends. We had a lot of fun and played several exciting games. It was very hot, so we took breaks and drank plenty of water. I scored one goal, and everyone cheered for me. After playing, I felt tired but happy because I got some good exercise and enjoyed spending time with my friends.
Level: C1.
This is a very natural and well-written paragraph. Your ideas flow smoothly, your grammar is accurate, and your vocabulary is appropriate for the context. There are no real mistakes to correct, only an optional stylistic alternative. Excellent work! 😊
19 de jul. de 2026 15:05
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Kaisei
Competencias lingüísticas
Inglés, Japonés
Idioma de aprendizaje
Inglés
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