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In the same way wizards and magicians usually do, probably you have already imagined I have reread your latest mail. Swimming through all these words, surfing over the straight text lines, and finally diving into the warm sea of meanings and emotions, I have enjoyed enormously my secret journey. Coming back to the shore, feeling happy and satisfied, I laid down in the sun for a while, thinking: I would bathe myself again. Journeys are made for knowing new places, and different people; for go out of our little place on the world and come into the shoes of other people, trying to look at things with their own eyes.
21 de dic. de 2023 12:31
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You have probably already imagined, with the knack of wizards, that I have reread your latest mail. WHY "REread"? Swimming through all these words, surfing over the straight text lines, and diving finally into the warm sea of meaning and emotion, I have enjoyed enormously my secret journey. Landing ashore, feeling happy and satisfied, I LAY down in the sun for a while, thinking I would bathe myself again. THE PAST TENSE OF "LIE" IS "LAY". For discovering new places and new acquaintances, journeys excel. They allow us to step out of our little place on the planet and into the shoes of others. From there we become able to see as if through their eyes. "I would bathe myself again" should be in italics. Alas, that is not possible on this platform. Try putting clauses next to the words they modify. For example, "in the same way wizards ... do" modifies "imagined". I don't understand "straight text lines".
21 de diciembre de 2023
In the same way wizards and magicians usually do, you have probably already imagined I have reread your latest mail. Swimming through all these words, surfing over the straight text lines, and finally diving into the warm sea of meanings and emotions, I have enormously enjoyed my secret journey. Coming back to the shore, feeling happy and satisfied, I laid down in the sun for a while, thinking: I would bathe myself again. Journeys are made to get to know new places, and different people; to leave our little place on the planet and walk in the shoes of other people, trying to look at things from their perspective.
21 de diciembre de 2023
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