I'm writing a resume. Can anyone help me to check ou this sentence？
a. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store of tmall selling household appliances.
b. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store, selling household appliances, of tmall.

Which way to say it is better? Or the other way.

Question

I'm writing a resume. Can anyone help me to check ou this sentence？
a.  Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store of tmall selling household appliances.
b. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store, selling household appliances, of tmall.

Which way to say it is better?  Or the other way.

Answer

You really shouldn't put either of those on a resume. Can you rephrase the question?