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How to make this sentence that I write sound more natural? Though she is busy, by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.2) Though she is busy, by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, I'm pretty sure that she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.
30 de ago. de 2015 11:15
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Though she is busy, but by working harder, improving the efficiency of doing things and removing pointless activities from her life, I'm pretty sure that she can squeeze time out of every second to write the paper that is important to her.
30 de agosto de 2015
Oh sorry, I think I misunderstood the sentence.
30 de agosto de 2015
I'm not sure but I think you could exclude "by" and replace "second" with "day".
30 de agosto de 2015
The sentence does sound natural Shirleen. It's fine.
30 de agosto de 2015
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