Would you please answer this question for me? Thank you in advance
I want to have a very respectful letter to send to a professor. What is your opinion about the following message? Is it polite? or does it need to change in some parts?
Dear Professor .......
Around two months ago, I have communicated with you for over 10 days and during that time and through your guidance, I could correct xxxxx equation which had been miscalculated by myself earlier. Now I have written a paper and I want to submit it. xxxxx equation is used as some part of basic calculation in the paper. In the section acknowledgement, if you accept, I want to appreciate you for your advice but before that I'd like to inform you about this task. Please tell me whether you agree or not.
Best regard
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