Is there any grammar mistake
Guests invited every year can help investors gauge the investment dynamic, clear investment context, and continue to increase their value of wealth.
There are some Masters Forums and finance lectures held during the exhibition, investors show their great interest in attending the forums to learn the market trend and financing capability.

Question

Is there any grammar mistake
Guests invited every year can help investors gauge the investment dynamic, clear investment context, and continue to increase their value of wealth.
There are some Masters Forums and finance lectures held during the exhibition, investors show their great interest in attending the forums to learn the market trend and financing capability.

Answer

Monica , for long correction , pls write them in your notebook under community aboce

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