Janell
Please help to correct this sentence. Daily delivery product is the most important business line in retail chain stores. About 60% revenue flow in the chain store should give credit to this business line. We are professional daily delivery product supplier, we put major effort into developing this business line, deliver a lot products, such as: Natural Yeast Bread, raw materials of salmon sushi and cod sushi, etc.
9 de feb. de 2017 5:55
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Thank you for your remind.
9 de febrero de 2017
Hi Janell, if you'd like someone to correct you, it's best to write these as notebook entries. The "answers" feature is usually used for asking language-related questions, not for written corrections.
9 de febrero de 2017
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