Does this sound natural?
좀비 재앙동안 당신이 생존할 수있을 것같아요?

친구들이내에:
첫번 물은 사람______
마지막 물은 사람______

I was trying to say:
Do you think you could survive a zombie apocalypse?
Within your friends:
Who would be bit first_____
Who would be bit last______

Question

Does this sound natural?
좀비 재앙동안 당신이 생존할 수있을 것같아요?

친구들이내에: 
첫번 물은 사람______
마지막 물은 사람______

I was trying to say:
Do you think you could survive a zombie apocalypse? 
Within your friends: 
Who would be bit first_____
Who would be bit last______

Answer

좀비 재앙에서 여러분이 생존할 수 있을 까요?

친구들 중에: 
첫번째로 물릴 것 같은 사람______
마지막으로 물릴 것 같은 사람______
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If you have any question, feel free to ask me. :D

Answer

IT IS VERY GOOD, JUST NEED ONE CORRECTION....IT SHOULD BE

Who would be BITTEN first?
Who would be BITTEN last?

Although if you are talking about a zombie apocalypse, it might be better to ask

Who would be EATEN first?
Who would be EATEN last?

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