Can someone please read over and just correct any errors for me? Japanese
Hajimena, kazoku wa 5 nin desu. Chichi to haha to otouto to imouto to watashi desu. Haha wa omoiyari ga atte, yasashī desu ga, kibishii desu. Sensei na no de, kibishiku naru toki ga arimasu. Chichi wa shizukana de shinkoku desu. Shigoto wa Toyota jidousha no enjinia desu. Yakin wo shimasu. Eiga wo mitari, hon wo yondari, hiruneshi shitari shimasu. Kyoudai no naka de watashi ga ichiban toshiue desu. Watashi wa 14 sai desu. --- koukou ni itteimasu. Mainichi, gakkou ni densha ni norimasu. Yuki san wa densha ni norimasuka? Otouto wa 10 sai desu. Supōtsu, toku ni tenisu o tanoshimimasu. Imouto wa kotoshi, 7 ni narimasu. Kawaikute omoshiroi desu. Ichiban sukina tabemono wa razania desu.

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Hajime"ni",  ”watashi" wa Chichi to haha to otouto to imouto to watashi "no 5 nin kazoku" desu.

Haha wa omoiyari ga atte, yasashī desu ga, Sensei (or "Kyoushi") na no de, kibishiku naru toki ga arimasu.

Chichi wa shizukana de shinkoku (←? If you want to say "He is serious" in Japanese, you should say "majime") desu.

Shigoto wa Toyota jidousha no enjinia "wo shiteimasu".

Yakin wo shi "tei "masu.

Eiga wo mitari, hon wo yondari, hirune "wo" shitari shi "tei" masu.

Kyoudai no naka de watashi ga ichiban toshiue desu.

Watashi wa 14 sai desu. --- koukou ni itteimasu. Mainichi, gakkou "made" densha "de" "kayotteimasu". Yuki san wa densha ni norimasuka?

Otouto wa 10 sai desu. Supōtsu, toku ni tenisu o tanoshi"ndeimasu".

Imouto wa kotoshi, 7 ni narimasu. Kawaikute omoshiroi desu.

Ichiban sukina tabemono wa razania desu.

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