•"i didn't like the way she spoke to me" -> this litteraly translates as: "no me gustó la manera en la que me habló"
•"Perhaps she doesn't like me. I thought to myself" would be :"Quizás no le gusto. Me dije a mi mismo (o pensé"
•"After getting up..." who is getting up? She is, so it would be: "después de levantarse..."
•"if she had had better scissors and a mirror, she would have cut it herself" -> si ella hubiera tenido mejores tijeras y un espejo, se lo hubiera cortado ella misma.
Hope this helps! Good job (: