correct me plz
Hi, my names is Nesrine and I am 21 years old. I am from Algeria and I live in Algeirs. I study languages at bouzareah university. I am going to finish my studies and become a teacher because I am good with children. My project that I want to fulfill is to open my own private school. So I need to work very hard and make money.
my biggest dream is to travel all around the world.

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You need to capitalize the name of your school since it is a proper noun.  So, Bouzareah University.

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Hi, my name is Nesrine and I am 21 years old. I am from Algeria and I live in Algeirs. I study languages at Bouzareah university. I'm going to finish my studies and become a teacher because I'm good with children. The goal that I want to achieve is to open my own private school, so I need to work very hard and make money.
My biggest dream is to travel all around the world.

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"I study languages at ... university" change that to.. I'm currently enrolled in ... university to study language.

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Capitalism the My in "my biggest dream"

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So, i need to work extremely hard..