MARKET RESEARCH Industry In recent years, Vietnam has become a country with a strong tourism industry, with more than 5 million international visitors generating 620,000 VND billion in 2018. In addition, Vietnam also reached the top of the list of tourism reviews about travelling and living. Therefore, this is the "Golden Time" for Vietnam's industrial tourism expansion. With the available natural advantages and the area's entertainment areas not yet developed, the mother's village (I don’t understand...what is mother’s village?) will be a new destination with a unique model that no one has applied to bring “New Wind” to the particular Local tourism industry and the general tourism industry.

I did it by Grammarly butmy teacher said that my assignment still have many grammar errors like the wrong ways to describe the case. Please give me some help :(((

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