大家好！我是正在学习英语写作的中国大一学生！(Hi everyone, I am a freshman studying English writing) 以下是想要修改的句子：(The following is my writing) 1. My cousin is a child who likes to do things independently and can live confidently on their own. 2. When he studied English, he found that he could see letters as shapes, and words as pictures. 3. He said he would make up for his deficit of character by being a person dedicated to society. Thank you for your international help！！！