I overslept today for the first time in a long time. I'm so shocked. However, when I was sleeping, Suzu Hirose appeared in my dream. It made me happy. I'm always tired on Tuesdays. It's hard because I

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I overslept today for the first time in a long time. I'm so shocked. However, when I was sleeping, Suzu Hirose appeared in my dream. It made me happy. I'm always tired on Tuesdays. It's hard because I have a part-time job after school. It's summer vacation soon, so let's do our best. I plan to study for TOEIC during the summer vacation！

4 de jul. de 2023 0:13

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I overslept today for the first time in a long time. I'm so shocked. However, when I was sleeping, Suzu Hirose appeared in my dream. It made me happy. I'm always tired on Tuesdays. It's hard because I have a part-time job after school. It's summer vacation soon, so let's all do our best (or: so I'll do my best). I plan to study for the TOEIC during the summer vacation！

Good job. Note: If this text is for other students, then "let's (all) do our best" makes sense, but if this is for the general public to read, it would be better to keep it focused on you (I'll do my best).

4 de julio de 2023

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