Matheus
Once, during the sunset, I sat on my balcony with my dog on my lap. He was just 5 months old and usually so energized. There was not a moment in which he would not be eager to play, bite and run, however he atypically stood quietly with me. Both of us watching the golden sunlight shine onto us in that warm afternoon. I took a picture of the moment and I could feel how much I meant to him. Valentim - that was his name - died a few weeks laters. I still miss him and take that moment as a very special one. I hope to see him one day, so we can watch the sun set once more.
25 de mar. de 2022 15:49
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Once, during sunset, I sat on my balcony with my dog on my lap. He was just 5 months old and was usually so energetic. There was not a moment in which he would not be eager to play, bite and run, however he stood quietly with me, which was unusual for him. Both of us watched the golden sunlight shine onto us in that warm afternoon. I took a picture of the moment and I could feel how much I meant to him. Valentim - that was his name - died a few weeks later. I still miss him and remember that moment as a very special one. I hope to see him one day, so we can watch the sun set once more.
Good description Matheus. "Atypically" isn't a mistake but it's quite a formal word (so it sounds unusual in this context). I'm glad you enjoyed that moment with your dog but it's sad that he passed away soon after.
25 de marzo de 2022
Once, during the sunset*, I sat on my balcony with my dog on my lap. He was just 5 months old and usually so energetic. There was not a moment in which he would not be eager to play, bite and run, however he atypically stood quietly with me. Both of us watching the golden sunlight shine onto us in that warm afternoon. I took a picture of that moment and I could feel how much I meant to him. Valentim - that was his name - he died a few weeks later. I still miss him and remember that moment as a very special one. I hope to see him one day, so we can watch the sun set once more. * While watching the sunset/ while the sun was setting
25 de marzo de 2022
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