Enyer Josue
Other writing and practice of english. I think that everyone person have different capacity, but I no said it for offend, rather, I said it because is my appreciation of this point of live. For example, no all the person feeling the same when they are in public or when are alone; equal, a person could have only one hand or une feet, and we can to imagine that persons: a perhaps to feel cover the love of his family or considered for the society where his lives, but other could feel sad, depression, all in all bad. Everyone have too different formation educational and thus, not all have the same form to appreciate the live. Different beliefs, different face... It is a structure social with individuals that the conform. If we can see it, no all have the same capacity but we can to live in middle of it society without to be obstacles for other because perhaps they will can't go up after. Then I believe that a person can get promoted doing very bad o very good, only depending of the capacity that has for confront the obstacles. And very up is the will of God, but, include the same bible speak about the different capacity of someone person. A song said: "We can build the earth, better place to dwell, we can bless tomorrow if we get out best today" Very thanks for your corrections, excuse me for repeat so much "different" what others expression for that could be?
15 de ago. de 2023 13:42
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I believe that every individual possesses a distinct capacity, and I express this not to cause offense but as a reflection of my perspective on life. For instance, not everyone experiences the same emotions in public versus solitude. Similarly, a person might have a physical difference such as having only one hand or one foot. We can envisage these individuals: one may bask in the warmth of family love and societal acceptance, while another might grapple with feelings of sadness, depression, and overall negativity. Educational backgrounds also vary significantly, leading to diverse ways of appreciating life. Distinct beliefs and countenances form a societal structure that accommodates different individuals. This awareness prompts us to acknowledge that not everyone possesses the same capacities, yet we can coexist harmoniously within this societal framework without hindering others, as their progress might be impeded. Consequently, I hold the belief that an individual's progress hinges on their ability to overcome obstacles, regardless of whether they perform exceptionally well or poorly. The ultimate outcome is subject to the divine will, and even the Bible acknowledges varying capacities within individuals. As the lyrics of a song suggest: "Together, we can shape a better world to inhabit; we can usher in a brighter tomorrow by giving our best today." I appreciate your patience with the repetition of the word "different." To diversify your expressions, you could use alternatives such as "varying," "distinct," "diverse," "unique," "individual," and "assorted." This will lend your writing a more varied and polished tone.
15 de agosto de 2023
Thank you so much. I appreciate your advises.
15 de agosto de 2023
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