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Essay. Experience, gained from reading, compared with other.
I have written this essay a part of my IELTS preparation. I would be very grateful to anyone, who will check my grammar. Thank you.
Question:
It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Answer:
The books and literature became integral part of human education from ancient times. The ability to read and write is very important step on the ladder of evolution. However, I personally believe that some other sources of knowledge are more important in human life, and there are a number of arguments to support that claim.
At first, our ability to read is not natural. If we compare reading with speaking, we will see that saying (and facility to understand speech) is inborn facility. There is some part in our brain, which is responsible for speaking and listening. Any normal human baby is going to speak from 2 years or about that age. In contrast, reading is a skill. It can be learned, but it wasn't designed by nature. Secondly, in my opinion, our own experience, which we gain during our lives, has much more weight compared to reading. In fact, books only can provide theoretical knowledge. But theory is useless without practice. From our history we know that there were times, when we hadn't books, or access to books was limited only to special groups of people. As an example we can remember times of feudalism in Europe. Although common people couldn't receive books (only priests and nobility had opportunities for reading), they were able to live and develop ourselves.
On the other hand, despite the fact, that reading is not the most crucial source of knowledge in our life, it allows to extend our understanding and imagination beyond the normal limits. Actually, in my view, literature is the next step, it is the easy and safe way (compared to stories and myths, for example) to store information.
In conclusion I would like to summarize that in my believe the most important knowledge we receive from our own interactions with surrounding world. However, the value of books shouldn't be underestimated. Nowadays literacy is the fundamental part of education and without it humanity wouldn't have achieved all things we can see around.
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Essay: food preparation and life improvements
I've set out my view in this essay as a part of my preparation to IELTS exam. If someone corrected my grammar mistakes and style, I would be very grateful.
Question:
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Answer:
For the last 50 years, the ways, which used for food preparation have changed significantly. Nowadays we have many special tools and technologies for cooking, and it became possible only with development of related branches of science. As a result, our relation to food and cooking have changed, and of course it interacts with our daily routine.
There are a number of arguments to support that claim. At first, now we can prepare our food more easier and faster. Many new devices have occupied our kitchens, such as microwaves, toasters, food processors. It takes only several minutes to prepare a breakfast, so we have more time for some other activities. Moreover, now we can use a ready meals, and this invention allows to extremely rise the variety of food that person could prepare at home. Secondly, since we can preserve our food much longer than in the past, we can plan food shopping in more convenient way. And many families nowadays prefer to go to the supermarkets once a week.
On the other hand, it can be said that we should not review all this contemporary improvements individually. All surrounding technologies just the part of more global development process. Is cooking preparation is more easier nowadays? Definitely yes. But the public transport and, for example, communications is also became more effective. New technologies make our life easier and various upgrades in cooking is just an example.
In conclusion I would like to say that our daily life have significantly changed in 20th century. These changes involve many aspects of our life, and food preparation is one of them. As a result, new modern devices allow us to spend our cooking time more effectively.
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IELTS letter
This is a letter, I have written as a part of my IELTS preparation. I would be grateful to anyone, who will check my grammar. Thank you.
Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to airline. In your letter, you should explian:
* where and when you lost your bag
* what your bag looks like
* what its content were
Dear Sir/Madam
Last Tuesday I had been flying from New York to Paris, using service of your company. Unfortunately, after the trip had finished, I left one of my bags in the plane. It was completely my fault, I was in a hurry and this bag threw out of my head. I left it under the seat which was in front of me.
I discovered loss only at home, and now I am writing this letter to you, hoping to get my things back.
It is a small handbag, made of brown leather. It has two compartments. In first there was a blue photo camera and charging device for it. The brand of camera is Sony. In the second part there were a bottle of water and handkerchief. The pictures, which stored on this camera, are very valuable for me.
If your staff have found this bag (or not) please contact with me through email, I will be grateful.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Georgiy Ivanov
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Essay. Parents are the best teachers.`
This text is not the one I am very proud of. It turned awkward. But still...
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Answer:
Parents is the most close and loving people for almost every person. They are our first teachers and their lessons and influence are forming our characters and private features. Although their authority is the strongest during early years of growing, and their motives is focused on the child welfare, I personally believe, that the word "best" is not very suite here.
There are a number of arguments to support that claim. First, our parents can only influence us during our youth. It is deniable that their knowledge and understanding would be seen in person's mind and features until the end of his life. But soon after reaching the teenager age, we begin to expand our views and knowledge beyond the reach of our parents. As a result, the significant part of knowledge about surrounding world will be taught by other people and, perhaps, our own experience. Secondly, despite all love and caress about their children, some parents, especially the young, are not very good teachers. Of course there are some exceptions, for example some family businesses.
In the other hand, the knowledge we received from our parents is fundamental. The best and simplest method of teaching, from the beginning of the world, was the repeating. Children just repeat everything their parents do, and in a such way they learn to walk, to jump, to speak. Moreover, the parents are very interested in their child experience and educations in all meanings, and I would say they are the most careful and affectionate teachers.
In conclusion I would like to emphasize that the importance of parent's lessons can not be exaggerated. However, during our lives we could find many wise or just suitable for us teachers, and their influence will be more strong.
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IELTS letter
Good day. I am continue my IELTS preparations. Can you please show me my grammar and style mistakes? Thank you in advance.
Question:
You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teacher Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
* explain why you are writing
* describe your qualifications and experience
* explain how they can contact you
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Dear Mr John,
My name is Georgiy, and I am writing to apply for the position of Spanish instructor which I have read recently in the Teacher Professional magazine.
My origin is Russian and I have arrived to Great Britain several weeks ago. I am going to live and work in this country for at least several years and at the moment I am looking for an interesting work, which will require all my knowledge and skills.
Although I am not a native Spanish speaker, I can proudly said that my language skills in Spanish is far beyond normal, since I had been living in Madrid for 5 years. I worked as an interpreter, and was able to study Spanish very professionally. Spanish is not the only language I am familiar with. I also know such languages as French and German. And, since my home country is Russia, I am a native Russian speaker.
All my skills and achievements are presented in my curriculum vitae in details, which I have added to this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Georgiy Ivanov.
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Essay (University education)
Hello there. Right now I am preparing for the IELTS exam, and the most difficult part for me will be the writing. I have written this essay as a part of my preparation, and I will be very grateful to anyone, who will fix my grammar and style mistakes. (I've checked spelling using dictionary). Thank you in advance.
Question:
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Essay:
For the past hundred years our civilization has achieved incredible results in science, and it is said that at the moment we are developing with exponential speed. New times dictates new conditions, and in this new world education plays one of the main roles. Nowadays many branches of economy feel shortage in good specialists and education in colleges or universities becomes essential in many aspects. However, any student will receive benefits from extra education.
Firstly, the possibility to continue education after secondary school means prospect of high salary. More educated person is able to perform more complicated work, he knows his branch in more detailed way and, as a result, is more profitable for employer. For some high-paid professions the higher education is a requirement due to profession complexity. For example you can not become a doctor just after finishing high school, and I see it very reasonable due to very complicated structure of human body. To be able diagnosis the illness, medicine specialists have to know a lot about it. However, such knowledge require considerable time and therefore should be studied at university.
Secondly, sometimes higher education allow to develop ability and talents of the student. If he has already chosen his future profession, he will get more knowledge and experience about this field in college or university. Especially it can be said about young scientists or people, related to complicated fields such as engineers, builders or programmers. Higher education is the most prospective way to become a professional and to do favorite business.
In conclusion it can be said that nowadays higher education provides a lot of benefits for students. Economy require professional workers and educated people receive higher salaries. But also universities and colleges provides more deep understanding of subject and allow to discover new areas.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am leaving in St. Petersburg and my native language is russian and . I am a programmer, I am learning english, beacause i am intent to emigrate to Australia with my family.
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