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Can any one give an opinon about my writing?
At FIRST, I want to say, whoever is looking at this right now, thank u so much, I know it's a lot of working to just have a look or even try to corret it. It will be amazing if anyone can just give me some tipps or opinions about it, I will be really greaful. So, here is my writing:
When it comes to success, whatever areas they are about, talent is always one of these significant contributions. Therefore, it is not prudery anymore that the argumentation are becoming increasingly stiff whether individuals are hard-wired with talent.
It is generally acknowledged that some people are ment to be better with special talent. About this, history has provided a large number of striking evidences. Such as musician Beethoven and painter Van Gao, whose outstanding working can by no means be exceeded or achieve by solely hard working. More importantly, geniuses’ potential is not restricted to one aspect, which has been confirmed by numerous research findings. A 6 year old child can master several different languages and even perform much better in music, such examples are not rare for us.
Nonetheless, a majority of people take this question from other different views, like specialists can be created, or in a better word, can be trained. Apparently, faith plays a essential role in it. Taking handicaps as a example, they can also be experts in a wide range of areas, remarkably even in sports, as long as they have strong faith in themselves and make efforts. Furthermore, we should also take cultures, which have invisible and considerable influence on us, into consideration. Some particular and wellknown cases can prove this, Chinese are good at mathematic, similarly, Japanese also; Germans and Spanish are master of football, and so forth.
In conclusion, I think success belongs to the one who wants it and fights for it, which is something even a genius has to go though with. As to talent, I think it will stifle others’ potential and confidence of everyone take it too seriously.
30 de noviembre de 2013
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singular and plural
People's lives have changed dramatically ever since televisions were developed.
1. Can I also say: People's life has changed ....
2. What's the difference between EVRE since the television was and EVER since televisions were developed?
Sorry for my stupid quesions, guys. It's because I've read some articles laterly about these singulars and plurals, and now I am totally confused.
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Is there any mistake with this sentence? thanks.
The media can raise people's awareness of self-protection when they are facing crimes or dangerousness.
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Is there any mistake with this sentence? thanks.
A family with lesser stresses can boost their children's efiiciency of lerning.
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Is there any mistake with this sentence? thanks.
It is becoming increasingly prevalent that the press exaggerate or even misreport environment story, social problem, and so forth.
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Is there any mistake with this sentence? thanks.
When it comes to media the majority of people believe that a journalist should be completely objective which is in nowadays nearly impossible.
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Which one is better?
The pollution is increasingly serious and we should consequetly take action to deal with it.
The pollution is increasingly serious, therefor we should take action to deal with it.
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Damit und Dadurch
Gibt es Unterschied zwischen damit und dadurch?
vielen dank
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Ist der Satz richtig?
Andere halten dagen, dass der Einbürgerungstest für meisten Ausländer zu kompliziert und schwer wäre (oder sei oder einfach ist?)
Vielen Dank
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