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Please tell me whitch one is the correct one:
We belong to each other
or
We belong to each other's
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My new poem
I miss you
When you aren't around, I miss you so much.
My mind is flooded only with thoughts of you.
I can only hear your lovely voice calling for me.
I can only smell the sweetness of your body.
My heart is cold and feels lonely.
Every beat of my heart is a call for you.
It is begging you to shine my life again.
Please come back soon,
this loneliness is killing me.
Please stay with me a little bit longer
and make this pain fade away.
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Is this expressed correctly
When we want to say that all we think is someone:
My mind is flooded [by/with] your thoughts. (which one is correct or difference)
or
My mind is flooded [by/with] thoughts [about/of] you. (which one is correct or difference)
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Facing our problems with another view
We have to learn to see the beauty behind the simplest things of life. Every day the sun rises, there is nothing special on it, until we slow down our steps and contemplate how the sun slowly climbs from the horizon up to the blue sky. We will find out that this is something wonderful; this is a gift for us to begin our new fresh day. Even we are all looking at the same sun; each of us from different places will see and enjoy unique views. Just like the things that happened in our life. There are good and bad things. But if we do the same, by slowing down our steps, think carefully and differently. We can change our view. We can find a solution or different way to see our problems or mistakes. We will realize that we can learn from them too. Doing so we will find out that the problems, mistakes or bad things in our life are not really that bad. They can help us grow, gain more experience and will show us the right path to our success.
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A small poem I just wrote, hope people can check it for mistakes or make any suggestions.
Why are you still hesitating?
You wonder how true my heart is.
Just put your ears on my chest
and feel how fast my heart beats.
You wonder who is in my heart.
Just look deep in my eyes,
you will find her there.
You wonder how true my words are.
It’s not enough only to hear what I’m saying,
You need to feel what I’m telling.
I want to hear how fast your heart beats,
so I can know how you feel.
I want you to show me,
who is hiding in your heart.
I hope that person would be me.
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The mysterious power of destiny
Destiny
I have always thought that I have arrived late to this world.
My beliefs and values are too conservative for this world.
I have always imagined that I am a boat lost in the current of time,
drifting aimlessly and keeping me from getting here on time.
One day the path of our lives has come across.
Suddenly I realized why I was missing all this time.
I was lost because I didn't have a north or a star as a guide.
You are the reason for me to be lost in the stream of time.
I was waiting for you for a long time.
Now I’m thankful to destiny to let me find you after all this time.
You have become my north and my star till the end of time.
Hope you can stay by my side for all the time.
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What I wish to dream.
She asked me if I dreamed about her and what cloths was she wearing.
What I wish to dream.
I wish I could have dreamed about you.
But I don’t want to lie to you.
My dream is out of my control,
as my feeling for you,
that is something I cannot control.
Wish I could tell you,
what dress you had on you.
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Things that I wonder about this world.
Things that I wonder about this world.
I wonder how big the world is.
I wonder how small I am.
I wonder what fate is.
I wonder how far I have to go,
to find where my soul mate is.
I wonder when she will let me know,
what her name is.
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海底捕針, it this well written, for some impossible tasks?
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Single & Loneliness
Being single does not mean to be in loneliness.
Being accompanied does not save you feel lonely.
Loneliness emerges from the bottom of your heart.
A feeling out of yourself control.
And its only cure will be your soul mate.
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