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When I was in elementary school. I joined one club activity called “전래동요” which means traditional songs. At first, I joined that club because of my mother’s suggestion. At that time I’m very shy and passive kids. When I have to do my self-introducing in front of my classmates, I just crying even before say “hello” to my friends. So my mother want me to be a more brave kids and then she suggest me a singing Korean traditional music. I joined that club around 4 years at my age 10 to 13. I get a lot of chance to performing my singing at the National Center for Korean Traditional Performing Arts and other Korean traditional Musci festivals. But after I graduated from elementary school, I don’t have any chance to learn and joy the Korean traditional music during my middle and high school. The Korean traditional music which I learned when I was kids is not only excited just for me but also with my friends and audiences.
I think the Traditional Music from all the each countries reveals the spirit and culture of its real people’s thought. Korean music contains the Korean distinct feeling ‘Han (恨)’, which is similar with sorrow and resentful but different. And it can also reveal the culture of our ancestors just like the people in Korea believe that when the person died the body is dead but the spirit is still alive. So in Jongmyo there is the way that only the previous king’s spirits can go through.
Through this class I can get not only academic knowledge of Gukak, but also I can recall my memory at my elementary school. For example, from the information of the Jongmyo Jeryeak I can get the knowledge about the structure of Jongmyo such as Jungjeon and youngneongjeon. And from the all kinds of instrument that used in Jongmyo Jereak I can recall the memory that I play the Daegeum and Janggu when I was young. So I hope that students who listen this lesson with me in this semester, will enjoy the Korean Traditional Music. And I’m sure that many international students from other countries can be more favorable to Korean things. ‘Gukak’ is not that formal and strict music just like other western music such as musical and opera. I think ’Gukak’ can be completed by the singers and audiences. So I just want to be more conative and active audience in the Gukak concert. Therefore I hope to learn how to enjoy the real ‘Gukak’ and how to be more active audience in this course.
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The University wants to add a new course. What should this new subject be? (need grammar correction)
According to the research carried out by one newspaper, more than 85 percent of the university students are hope to backpacking travel in their early 20s. And actually among that research responders around 46 percents are planning to backpacking travel or they already done it. So ‘Backpacking travel course’ is suited for the University’s new course. Backpacking travel need great physical strength and less money than sightseeing such as cruise travelling. Therefore, university students are perfect for the backpacking traveller. ‘Backpacking Travel Course‘ is helpful for the students because of practical and academical reasons.
In practical reasons, this class provide real information for the students who prepare for the Backpacking travel. Students can get traveller’s information such as tourist attractions or famous restaurants from the internet. On the other hand it is hard to get actual, usable tips for the backpacking travellers. So ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ is necessary for the students who are trouble with this problem. Because backpacking travel course contain useful tips such as ‘how to packing the backpack more light, how to leave out the gypsies who are strongly begging for money in slum’.
In academical reasons, this course provide knowledges about world’s geography and culture. It contain climate and vegetation information in various places on the earth. And beyond that simple information, it provide useful tips such as ‘Best season to travel West Europe is winter because of west coast oceanic climate differ from general thought’ or ‘Best period for the Salar de Uyuni is Bolivian rainy season that from November to April.’ And backpacking travel course also contain world’s culture knowledges such as food, drinking and dancing. For example alpine region in Latin America eat Guinea Pig. Cause people who live this region are hard to get protein. There are few animals because of rugged topography.
For these practical and academical reasons, ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ are suited for the university students. Early 20s are perfect for the backpacking travel. Because they have a lot of time during vacation and they are enough energetic to go around all over the world. But after 30s, they have no time to travel because of their work and they are less energetic than 20s. Through this course students can be more independent and well-planned person. And through this experience their inner side must grow.
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The University wants to add a new course. What should this new subject be?
Can you help me with the grammar problem? :(
According to the research carried out by one newspaper, more than 85 percent of the university students are hope to backpack travel in their early 20s. And actually among that research responder around 46 percents are planning to backpacking travel or they already done it. So ‘Backpacking travel course’ is suited for the University’s new course. Backpacking travel need great physical strength and less money than sightseeing such as cruise travelling. Therefore university students are perfect for the backpacking traveller. ‘Backpacking Travel Course‘ is helpful for the students because of practical and academical reasons.
In practical reasons, this class provide real information for the students who prepare for the Backpacking travel. Students can get traveller’s information such as tourist attractions or famous restaurants from the internet. On the other hand it is hard to get actual, usable tips for the backpacking travellers. So ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ is necessary for the students who are trouble with this problem. Because backpacking travel course contain useful tips such as ‘how to packing the backpack more light, how to leave out the gypsies who are strongly begging for money in slum’.
In academical reasons, this course provide knowledges about world’s geography and culture. It contain climate and vegetation information in various places on the earth. And beyond that simple information it provide useful tips such as ‘Best season to travel West Europe is winter because of west coast oceanic climate differ from general thought’ or ‘Best period for the Salar de Uyuni is Bolivian rainy season that from November to April.’ And backpacking travel course also contain world’s culture knowledges such as food, drinking and dancing. For example alpine region in Latin America eat Guinea Pig. People who live this region are hard to get protein. There are few animals because of rugged topography.
For these practical and academical reasons, ‘Backpacking Travel Course’ are suited for the university students. Early 20s are perfect for the backpacking travel. Because they have a lot of time during vacation and they are enough energetic to go around all over the world. But after 30s, they have no time to travel because of the work and they are less energetic than 20s. And through this course student can be more independent and well-planned person.
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can you help me with the grmmar problem~? :(
Relationship between friends in university is too shallow, so it’s hard to make real friend. Our whole life is changing because of the difference between university and high-school student‘s lifestyle. University students are more free than before cause they are adult now. So all the things that we do and all the place that we go are totally changing. According to these huge alteration, our relationship between friends are changed too. Relationship in university is more light and superficial than before. It's because of these several reasons. First, in contrast to high school, students don‘t have any fixed timetable, so the lunch time and relaxing time is all different between them. Therefore, students don‘t eat and relax together. Second, students are usually doing a part-time job or tutoring, so they spend less time in university. Even after all classes, they don‘t have time to get along with each other.
To solve this problem, joining particular club activity, which students are interested in could be great solution. Through club activity they can find real friend whose interest filed is same with them. ---------------------------------------------------
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Relationship Between Friends in University.
Relationship between friends in university is too shallow, so it’s hard to make real friend. Our whole life is changing because of the difference between university and high-school student‘s lifestyle. University students are more free than before cause they are adult now. So all the things that we do and all the place that we go are totally changing. According to these huge alteration, our relationship between friends are changed too. Relationship in university is more light and superficial than before. It's because of these several reasons. First, in contrast to high school, students don‘t have any fixed timetable, so the lunch time and relaxing time is all different between them. Therefore, students don‘t eat and relax together. Second, students are usually doing a part-time job or tutoring, so they spend less time in university. Even after all classes, they don‘t have time to get along with each other.
To solve this problem, joining particular club activity, which students are interested in could be great solution. Through club activity they can find real friend whose interest filed is same with them. (--------------------) Some will argue that it is impossible to make real friend in university because university is a microcosm of real society. They said “They just make colleague to get profit and information from their friend.” But through this solution it can be possible to make real friend. Also, it can be possible to share their real faith.
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