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Reisen
Die Reisen sind ein gut Kommunikationsmittel, weil wir ins Ausland um zu mehrere Kultur aufsaugen fahren. Dank der Reisen, kann man viele Leute treffen, dann Sprachen kennen zu lernen und danach ist man offener. Das ist was ein typische Au-Pair-Mädchen, die studiert im Ausland und sich kümmert um Kinder ,macht. Aber, die Studenten auch, die ein Freiwilliges soziales Jahr nehmen, machen das. Man stellt fest, dass es andere Horizonte mit verschiedenen Personen gibt, und es ist eine tolle Erfahrung. Dank das, sieht man die Welt unter einem anderen Blickwinkel.
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Smartphones
Today I want to tell you about a TV program called Cash Investigation which tells about the shameless secret of our smartphones. The program illustrates the notion Idea of Progress but also Spaces and Exchanges.
First, smartphone is a kind of idea of progress because it makes our life more enjoyable, easier, better and technology innovations are done every time. But these smartphones that we have in our pockets illustrate also the notion "spaces and exchanges". I think in spaces and exchanges there is a connection between at least, 2 people, 2 countries, or firms of all around the world.And thank to smartphone, we can be connected when we want to people of the whole world.
Every second, 57 smartphones are sold in the entire world and most of them by the leaders are Samsung and Apple. Their smartphones are the idea of progress, each new one is faster, better has something new.
We all have the money to pay it because indeed our country is rich. We have what we want for the most of us, but we do not know the other side of the coin: the human condition.
To make a smartphone we need raw material like ores, and a part of the ores are situated in Africa for example, especially in Democratic Republic of Congo, a south country. 5 million Congolese die every month in the mines. There are also pregnant women at these places. These people work for 1 Euro the day. In China, the manufacture can be done by children who work until 13 hours in a row, the human condition is really unhealthy.
Samsung, Apple and Microsoft are pointed out for carelessness and children exploitation. The firms deny this just to make money as usual. Indeed, these firms will not stop their business especially when the margin between the retail price and the price of the material, the software, the production cost is in the order of 300€.
That's how idea of progress lead us: to the death of more than 5 million people, unhealthy conditions just for profits.
Then, is that kind of progress which makes people's life easier really good ? Knowing that it makes millions of people poorer than ever.
People know what happen in this world, but can't do without their mobile phone.
I link this subject to idea of progress because it includes technology innovations, the world goes faster and faster thanks to that, and I also link this subject to spaces and exchanges because mobile phones require people of all around the world and because of the international trade.
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Reisen
Erste, man wird sehen, dass Internet ist ein gut Kommunikationsmittel sondern auch die Reise auch ist. Die Reisen sind ein gut Kommunikationsmittel, weil wir ins Ausland um zu mehrere Kultur aufsaugen fahren. Dank der Reisen, kann man viele Leute treffen, dann Spachen kennen zu lernen und danach ist man offener. Das ist was ein typische Au-Pair-Mädchen, die studiert im Ausland und sich kümmert um Kinder ,macht. Aber, die Studenten auch, die ein Freiwilliges soziales Jahr nehmen, machen das. Man stellt fest, dass es andere Horizonte mit verschiedenen Personen gibt, und es ist eine tolle Erfahrung. Dank das, sieht man die Welt unter einem anderen Blickwinkel.
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Her, The film. Piece of news
This is my homework, if you have some criticism to do, it will help me, and and I'll take it into account
Today, I want to talk about a movie that I really like, Her. This film has been realized by Spike Jonze in 2013.
The scene takes place in Los Angeles, in 2025. The main character, Theodore, works for a website where he writes many kinds of letters for others, like declaration of love. He has a wife Catherine, but they broke up a year ago, and Theodore still doesn't manage to full the papers of divorce. He always loves her, he is depressed and live in the solitude.
But one day, an operating system (=software system), named OS1, sees the light of the day. This artificial intelligence is made to get used to, and evaluate by learning feelings, many things of life that humans being have. For example: at the beginning, when Theodore asked OS1's name, OS1 had to research for a name because OS1 didn't face to the question up before. OS1 has chosen the name Samantha. Day after day, we realize that Samantha and Theodore are in relationship, they make things together, Samantha evaluates, she has a conscious, we really have the impression that she is a human.
But there is something complex: Samantha is an artificial intelligence so she is just a printed circuit board, but we have the impression that she is really human maybe because she has learnt how to acts like a human being , she even can make love with him even if she has no body.
The second problem is that we realize Theodore is still alone: when he speaks to Samantha, he is physically alone, when he wakes up, he has nobody next to him. And especially, he is in love with a software, and that is really frustrating. The third problem is that everybody has a OS1, people are isolated because they always speak to the software.
With that such story, we can't say that technological progress is necessary for humans, because we are more and more dependent on it. We have the impression that it helps us in the everyday life, but don't realize that the more the technology evaluate, the more lazy we are and all the savoir-faire will be lost. For example, we can see at the beginning, that people can't be bothered to write their own letters and ask the writers to do their work.
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A new treatment for cancer
The fight against the cancer progress day by day. A cancer arises when cells breed in a disorderly way. A program named AcSé ( Accès sécurisé à des thérapies ciblées innovantes) was created by Inca (Institute of Cancer) and Agency of Medicines (ANSM), in France.
A few days ago, a new type of cancer treatment sees the light of the day, as a major progress in fighting the deadly disease. This treatment is called Immunotherapy. It consists in target and rehabilitate the cells of the immune system or help the body to produce more immune defense system, thanks to the crizotinib an anticancer reserved for adults, that also can be used for genetic diseases. Contrary to the chemotherapy and radiotherapy that attack healthy and ill cells, weaken and tire patients body's.
With this medicine, there is no side effects, like vomiting or hair loss, nor hospitalization. We just have to swallow a pill. And results come in 2 days.
Yet, this treatment is still a prototype, it is a new discovery and only few people test this kind of treatment. Moreover, these people were in hopeless cases, and researchers need for 15 years to know more informations about the medicine to commercialize it.
To my mind, this subject is an idea of progress because this new treatment can be a rise towards developments of medicines like HIV. And especially, it could save many lifes from now on. It is a big innovation. In the future, this kind of disease might be like the influenza.
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Konsumgesellschaft
Hi, someone can correct my homework, this is a song I made with my friend for the German lesson...
Konsumgesellschaft, bringst du uns dazu, egoistisch zu sein
Brauchst du wirklich diese vieleKleider, dieses viele Geld.
Du willst absolut ein Smartphone, dein Nachbar hat keins.
Schau dich um! Um dich herum!
Wir bitten dich nicht alles aufzugeben, aber denken an deinen Nachbar, der hat kein Glück.
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Tragedy in Los Angeles [Homework]
Hi everyone, I have to talk about a current subjet to my classe during 5 minutes. ^^
This is my piece of new :)
Yesterday, a tragic event took place in Los Angeles 4 Policemen killed a homeless by firing several shots, exactly five shots.
In broad daylight, at the sidewalk of the Los Angeles' district named "Skid Row" ("les bas fonds"), we can see officers beating up a homeless nicknamed "Africa". Apparently, this person was involved in a burglary (cambriolage) .
First of all, after the burglary, Africa was fighting against an other homeless in a tent when the policemen arrived at this place and recognized Africa as a suspect.
They tried to arrest (interpeller) BA during his fight. Bad/ Wrong Idea. The man struggled as more as possible. A truncheon of an officer fell down so a women picked it up and threatened the law enforcement. 2 policemen attempted to arrest her too and 4 policemen struggled against the homeless and used the taser that did not catch him. Suddenly, one of the officers yelled "Drop the gun! Drop the gun!" Five shots followed. These shots were fatal for Africa who died a few minutes later.
After learning taht, I think the law enforcement of LA can't protect the inhabitants as they have to do and then I'm sure that the people feel the insecurity more than it is supposed to be.
Never the less, I link this subject to Myth and Hero because I think this serial of severial tragedies like that will be in the memory of a lot of Americans especially Afro-Americans who still suffer of racism now
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A fictional letter
Dear Mrs Bipbip,
Last week, I lived the worst experience of my life...
I told to you about a cruise that I had always wanted to do, I was going for a walk with someone who is next to my cabine, its name is Jenna, she was a really nice girl, she said she went in a cruise with her fiancé for the first time.
In short, we intend to prowl the boat around then we were about to get out the boat , when we heard a big funny noise that nobody could not ignore. 2 minutes later, we realized the boat sank on the side. The people began to panic and to run around, it was terifying. We had to stick to fixed objets to don't fall into the empty space. Jenna still had not seen her fiancé.
This scene became to be hellish: in less than 5 minutes about fifty persons fall into this empty, I felt sick to my stomach and my head. The cruise ship collapsed little by little. Jenna and me were close to a door that leads to the exterior, we managed to go out with difficulty and people could help us out.
Unluckly, my friend has been informed that she lost her fiancé. we were few of survivors...
I feel so sad when i think about all this.
By hoping you will aswer soon, best regard.
(I have no imagination ^^')
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A nice day
A nice day.. But why ? In my last note, I said "I love dancing",
I practice 2 kind of Hip Hop, and Street Jazz.
My dance group did a music video, 2 mounths ago, and the choregrapher
released the video today
But unfortunately, I joined this group too late..
So I didn't have the good luck to dance as I wanted ^^'
I give you the link, if you want to see this video :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU_6hx6wVwo
I hope I'll dance a next time, :D
Now you know why love dancing, just have too see this video :)
Bye bye !
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I love dancing ;D
Hi every body :)
At this moment I dance only Tuesday and Sunday
I practice Hip-hop since 2 years, and now I began to practice Street Jazz (i exactly don't know the name)
And it's like a dream *_* My teacher dance Very very very well it's awesome !
He said I dance well so I'm really glad
Oh, my dance group also do a video for each choregraphy It's very class :)
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