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Correct the errors please! Think about how technology plays a part in your daily life. Do you think technology is making us lazier or more efficient? In my opinion, all technology change is a double-edged sword. In some way it helps us to be more efficient in our life routine and do things more quickly. For example, now is easier for any student to understand some things that were difficult to understand some years ago, thanks to the multimedia technologies. but in the other hand it is dangerous. And there are a lot of ways to waste time badly. But, in general, about if it is making us lazier or more efficient, this depends of the kind of person. Somebody could use it just for spend their time in vain activities. But the other ones could profit of the several advantages that this tools provide.

Evening routine. (correct me please) I usually get out from work about 5:00 pm. and I change my clothes as soon as I get home, Then I review my email and my "EVA"(learning virtual platform) page and I take my books next. I study until 7:00pm which I take a rest and if it is Wednesday or Friday I do laundry while I'm taking a shower, if not, I go walking around for 30 minutes for relaxing. After shower or walking, either I go out for dinner or sometimes I cook, when I'm not so tired then I eat and then I continue studying for three or two hours more until I get sleepy and then I go to bed.

Correct me please! I think it's very important leading a healthy life style, people all should worry of their health and adopt advices like: eat healthy, do any sport or something. Even it is important because you can get good feeling all the day in your work or family activities. I usually go to run twice a week, once on Tuesday and once on Thursday, for thirty minutes each time.