Would you like to help for me with great correction for the my short essay? The domain name servers of GB Bank were working in their own data center. I implemented a new domain name server which is located on the cloud. During that implementation, I got a failure related to some dns records of the yahoo server. Some customers of the bank could not send email to GB Bank using the Yahoo email. Those emails are very critical and hurried because those people are employee's sending salary information. That condition was very tricky, almost all of them calling over the phone and telling our employees about the salary of this month. I have created users for those users on a shared server and suggest they upload on it. Then I received those data and passed all of them to the accountant of the bank. then the problem is solved. Also I fixed the wrong dns record.

Please everyone, I need right correction to fix following the sentences It’s created by “Bilguun” who graduated from Harvard university to help to others who are learning English by any way like me and to describe the way How to get great Scholarship from great universities of United state. It’s created by Zolbayar who works from Mongolia to foreign company through remote work. So His learning method and the tip was very amazing and useful

Human being, I needed correction, Pls help me kind people As my view, Human being is completely different compare with other animals which lives on the earth. Because, The brain of human is much developed for long time period than others, and creating more identifies and successful things based on the advance. For example: in last few decades, Human beings doing amazing things using information technology and solving very difficult problems that on one else on earth can, and leading of future of earth. However, Somethings of those are affecting as wrong way for the nature and influence of it is coming back to us through strange decease and awful climate change.

これは　わたしの　はじめて　書きものです。 私の住んでいる　場所にとても　熱くなりました。のれから　わたしは　あのなつきせつ　来ていると　おもうています。わたしは　外に　友達と　遊びたいと　おもうています。でも　あの　コロナウイルスが　広がっているので　うちで　いることは　いいですと　考えて　います。

I am looking forward Japanese language partner I am looking forward Japanese language partner

Green grassland 2 - I would be grateful if someone help me with correction My brother and I traveled out to green grassland where no one lives almost ten years ago. We were searching new place to migrate far away from the crowds with very rich pasture. We had found that place. When we got there, we set up our cottage which was behind berry patches, orchard and great stables. after that built our estate, we was getting big joy in life, the smile was overwhelming in our face. The level of our happiness was infinite.

The wallet assets that spend in-country, of "oyu-tolgoi" company reached more than $10billion The wallet assets that spend in-country, of "oyu-tolgoi" company also biggest external investment reached more than $10billion. this success of all of us companianship organization is prove that our prospective to contribute for development of Mongolia. in last ten years, We have been contributing for development of the country as those things including such as paid tax amount, national and countryside purchase, salary, rent and sociaty, the construction take shaped in countryside, donation. I would be grateful if someone could help me with correction.

Grassland-I will be very grateful for someone who helps me with correction. I was reaching out to green grassland with brother where no one lives, to prepare food supply for livestock and other animals who eat only plants. after reached out, we built our tent and prepared tools for our job. next morning, we very early started our job and the morning was beautiful and amazing, Because the place was so far from any place where mankind crowded. In other words, that was real wild nature. Especially evening and night hours were so cool. Because, many birds were singing and no more sounds were comes there except birds. So the stars were shining from head of us. The nature view was unforgetable and very expensive for us. I will be very grateful for someone who helps me with correction.

About first season of this year The news about new corona virus outbreak is started end of January, all of first cases were registered in Mainland of China and spread almost all round world. It’s not problem of China. Therefore everyone who lives in the earth, should care about it and be serious for this situation, and to contribute own possible to survive from the afraid within short time. My idea is the time we must merge to throw away the danger of the virus. Because Group of people have always great force and chance to solve any problem than individuals. My next word to talk to human being of the world, is that don’t to discriminate somebody based on who is where born, who is where live. Because we are living in only earth and breathing an air. I am looking forward the day, when we to congratulate to each other after avoid the virus from all cities and countries. I would be very grateful someone who helps me correction,