语法问题（如果用一句话表达，这句话有没有毛病？谢谢！） There was an interesting story in Song dynasty that a farmer was long to find a rabbit by waiting nearby a big tree since he once unexpectedly got a rabbit that run to the big tree from somewhere and break off its neck, dying instantly，but passing a year, farmer got nothing, the grass over the ground. ( i know i should divide this sentece , but i wonder if is right to combine one sentence? Thanks!)

one sentence There was an interesting story in Song dynasty that a farmer was long to find a rabbit by waiting nearby a big tree since he once unexpectedly got a rabbit that run to the big tree from somewhere and break off its neck, dying instantly，but passing a year, farmer got nothing, the grass over the ground. ( i know i should divide this sentece , but i wonder if is right to combine one sentence? Thanks!)

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WeChat In China, it’s popular to use the WeChat . WeChat is become one part of our life and we will hardly use it everyday. As matter as fact, WeChat greatly change our life giving us a lot of convenience. And now, I want to share my opinion about advantaged of WeChat. Firstly, we can chat with friends wherever you are. In specially, when you friends or parents is far away with you, it will save a bill of phone’s free because of the Voice Chat. The Voice Chat, a function, support to communicate by the voice, so you can chat with others like calling phone . In addition, whenever you want to talk with somebody, just registering the WeChat , which is very convenient and fast, I think. What’s more, the most importance is safety avoiding swindle from the internet, because you register the WeChat by the your phone number, which is only the approach. Naturally, it improve the credibility of net friends. WeChat is a great communication platform , and it’s indeed to help us a lot on the contact among the people. However, it isn’t only a advantage electronic contact, but also progress of traditional social contact. From the face to face contact to the electronic communication, in a way, that’s full of the time meaning. (Please point out where my mistakes are and show me a better way to express it when its not good as if they are in Chinglish. Thanks! (*^__^*) )

Packaging of Present At present, there is a serious phenomenon that most of good are packaged excessively. Especially, on the Spring festival or the Mid-autumn festival, many people prefer to chose something beautiful but usefulness rather than something useful. What is the mainly reason for this? I am so curious. In my opinion, firstly, some people think that the packaging of the gift symbolize the respecting for the guests. The more beautiful the gift is packaged, the more honorable the guests are. In order to expressive the respecting to the clients, most people will choose the elegant present to show the friends, although the gifts is inferior, usefulness, or terrible, which result the merchants pay more attention to the packaging ignoring the quality of the presents. In generally, the phenomenon of packaged excessively is popularly. In addition, I thing the government maybe manage the relevant organization without the good way. And they can’t effectively take action to control the above phenomenon. Lacking the power of government, it is more and more serious that the present is packaged excessively. Thus, the governmental management is one of the factor. To be honest , the reason of the packaging excessively isn’t only this. But I thing the custom and governmental power are mainly reason. And we need to change our mind about the opinion for the gift. What’s more, the government should take more and effective action to control the packaging. (Please point out where my mistakes are and show me a better way to express it when its not good as if they are in Chinglish. Thanks! (*^__^*) )

Culture Square In China, there are many famous scenic spots, for example the Tian An Men, the Great Wall, the West Lack…. We are proud to these scenic spot and historic resort. And for the most of the foreign, the most impressive place is also the above scenic in China. However, I will recommend to you the Culture Square, a general place in the city. You can find it in most of the city. The Culture Square is the heaven for the students where you can see all kind of the activities set up by the students. These activities is mainly introduced the local culture or the school culture, which is full of the cultural atmosphere. You can learn many knowledge form the colorful culture activities and make a lot of new friends. Obviously, the Culture Square is meaningful and decent place. Moreover, I think it is a excellent place for a foreign. Firstly, you can study the Chinese culture by join the activities. Secondly, you can communicate and interact with other students to improve your spoken and make some friends having common interesting. That’s so good. In a word, the Culture Square is a window through which you can get a big picture of the campus, is definitely a place. We can learn about many knowledge from it. (Please point out where my mistakes are and show me a better way to express it when its not good as if they are in Chinglish. Thanks! (*^__^*) )

Packaging of Present At present, there is a serious phenomenon that most of good are packaged excessively. Especially, on the Spring festival or the Mid-autumn festival, many people prefer to chose something beautiful but usefulness rather than something useful. What is the mainly reason for this? I am so curious. In my opinion, firstly, some people think that the packaging of the gift symbolize the respecting for the guests. The more beautiful the gift is packaged, the more honorable the guests are. In order to expressive the respecting to the clients, most people will choose the elegant present to show the friends, although the gifts is inferior, usefulness, or terrible, which result the merchants pay more attention to the packaging ignoring the quality of the presents. In generally, the phenomenon of packaged excessively is popularly. In addition, I thing the government maybe manage the relevant organization without the good way. And they can’t effectively take action to control the above phenomenon. Lacking the power of government, it is more and more serious that the present is packaged excessively. Thus, the governmental management is one of the factor. To be honest , the reason of the packaging excessively isn’t only this. But I thing the custom and governmental power are mainly reason. And we need to change our mind about the opinion for the gift. What’s more, the government should take more and effective action to control the packaging. (Please point out where my mistakes are and show me a better way to express it when its not good as if they are in Chinglish. Thanks! (*^__^*) )

National History In China, we have to take a course—history, which is our required course. However, most of students still don’t emphasize history and think Chinese, English and math are the key on studying. So history is ignored naturally. As far as I am concerned, history, especially national history, is necessary subject for every student as well as is never placed by other curriculum. As a student , or as a member of China, it is a duty to learn about own country’s history. And it’s more a civil duty than a student’s task to know the history. We are Chinese and understand the past is necessary, I think. Thus, I can’t stand that the intellectual don’t learn about history knowledge at all. In my opinion, national history, in some way, can strengthen the national awareness and responsibility. In addition, history experience can give us many idea and thought to develop a beautiful future effectively. Looking the departed experience, we would find that there are many faults that it needn’t have happened. Now, we know it and avoid it to occur again. Without history, country’s development will delay many year. Of course, happy and prosperous society, we are living, is impossible. In a word, history play an important role on development of country. It not only make us know what happened on the past, but teach us how to develop better. (Please point out where my mistakes are and show me a better way to express it when its not good as if they are in Chinglish. Thanks! (*^__^*) )

The First Time We have a lot of the first time in our life, for example the first cooking, the first washing the clothes, the first time going to school, the first time traveling…. Of course, that’s unforgettable and precious memory. Today, I would like to share my first time to travel Shenzhen, a beautiful city, by myself. When I was a twelve-year-old girl, I sudden want to visit the Shenzhen and I tell my parents soon and that they unexpectedly agree with my advise. However, they are too busy to accompany me to tour, and I have to go to there alone. That’s crazy for me, because I never went to some other city except my home town at that time. So I was nervous and afraid. In addition, there are many problem occurring my head, such as how can I get there? what should I do? who can I find to help me and so on. I am so fearful that I daren’t set out on my journey. My mother tell me just clam down and going and she urge me set off quickly without distracting thought. So, I have to carry on my plan about traveling. And fantastically, I found it’s different form my thought before I went to Shenzhen and it’s easy, even though I do meet a lot of difficult. I firstly found a hotel and live according to my parents suggestion and then I just do a plan every day to carry on. When I fallen a trouble, asking for help to my parents or local civilians. After solving the problem, just continuing my plan. During the time, I was happy and meaningful, which is also my one of the most precious memory on my life. Through this experience of traveling, to be honest, I learn a lot. Considering many thing for future, it’s naturally feel uneasy and scared. In many cases, our worried isn’t the trouble or difficult rather than unknown of future. In fact, we can’t control what happen in the next moment. Don’t think too much, just doing following your heart.