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IELTS
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?
What sort of punishment should parents ?
Using an appropriate method for upbringing children as a part of our future society has been one of the most crucial concerns among parents in these days. Apart from this, they are always doubtful to how should clarify the good behavior from wrong one. Since punishment has been suggested as a sole solution in many cases, in my view, the way used by parents to punish the children has many unreasonable consequences.
On the one hand, some argue that using punishment for children in earlier ages would definitely lead to some psychological problems. Because they think their mistakes can be the reason for the parents to don’t love them anymore, which means they can’t analyze the sole reason of the punishment, they just blame themselves as guilty person mistakenly. As children usually give their values from their parents point of view, relying on this policy in earlier age should not be appropriate for children. In other words, it is unlikely to change their demeanor, it is just affected the relationship between parents and children.
On the other hand, in order to distinguish right and wrong among some of the older children, parents should have set alight punishments to control their behaviors. Interestingly, it could be influential on children's social behaviors as well. For instance, children have unreasonable judgment about poor people in some cases. Which means poor person appearances would be the main aspect of this unfair judgement and they have tried to ignore them as human beings. Apart from this, parents should punish them with starting a conversation with some poor ones to know his/her stories. Also, if children make a laugh at some persons since he/she was poor parents should force them to apologize for him/her. It seems this kind of behavior from parents might certainly affect kids as they consider the parents like model of behavior.
In conclusion, although I believe that children should not be exposed from harsh punishment, in some ages using an appropriate punishment could allow them to build the own characteristic in the right way.
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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.
Do you agree?
Nowadays, many companies devote most of the high-leveled positions to men. Whether they are qualified or not. Apart from this, women's right is denied from some traditional policies. In my view, the companies should consider both genders as a job candidate indiscriminately.
First and foremost, It makes competitive atmosphere, despite of gender. In fact, by providing high leveled positions for women, companies make them satisfy by giving them a chance to be employed according ton their abilities, experiences and qualifications. Consequently, it leads to sense of fulfillment for both genders as they have the same right to achieve promotion.
Additionally, there are many advantages due to working women in high-leveled positions .For instance,women are really exact about details .Thus,this ability might decline, the rate of mistakes in various projects. As a result, some characteristics of women help companies to approach their goals sooner.
For conclusion ,women play important roles in companies.so,in my opinion,hiring women in higher positions could help companies to make a competitive atmosphere without gender discrimination and use women’ s ability alongside the men.
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my ielts essays
Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
While some people like doctors think their salary, whether the amount it has, is not in proportion to what actually they do in their jobs, specifically in comparison with some famous ones, others believe that no matter how hard is the job, the rate of income regards to some other policies. I tend to agree with former idea. In my view, many roads must people go on before approaching high salary.
First and foremost,overpayment of salary in some special jobs,whether its fair or not,might provides some dissatisfacation among other people .for instance when a nurse compare the impartance of her job to soccer players duties ,they can't talorate a susbtantial diffrences between their incomes to some famous ones ,while they believe that they are combating gnawing stress of their work atmosphear, they can not effort some of their basic needs.therefore, it is probably impact their motivation and make them unhappy about their jobs .thus,it seems this policy should be revised by policy makers.
A possible solution to keep the balance in people's income is to set new laws about monitoring the range of salaries .apart from this,they should hold some essential consultiative session with professional sociologist to reach a new point of view about the effects of inequity in salaries . For instance ,moneywise ,they can provides some free facilities by govermental budget to support some deprived jobs .moreover,they can introduce top ones ,which are sucessfull in their career,in popular to gave them fame and to value their jobs .therefore this trend leads to fulffilment among people working hard with lower income spontanasly.
Nowadays the more famous people or companies are, the more income they have. So, the rate of salary should will be considered as a crucial matter, among policy makers. From my point of view, the law should pay attention to all jobs indiscriminately. So, it is nessecary for government to encourage people to be satisfied with their jobs, either financially or mentally.
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This is one of my ielts essays
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
studying at university has become an indispensable part of many young adults' lives. many believe that qualifying for a job is the sole reason to attend universities .others, however, hold the view that there are other merits attributed to spending time at the university. From my point of view university education can impact on a student's characteristic to make him/her more mature to face the real aspects of life.
firstly ,some think the university education is just the best way to prepare students for their future jobs,one should keep in mind is that the university time is not actually enough to experience different subjects .simply,learning some specific courses takes much time from them. Thus,it's really hard to expect a lot.
For instance,the computer engineering students ideally devote more than 5 hours a day to study programming. so,there is no extra time for them to learn more from the university atmosphere.
However,many experts believe that besides many job opportunities which come from educational background,its not the one and only effect of universities on people's life.as a part of this,education can lead to some promote in people's characteristics .owes to this,they are more likely to be responsible.as a matter of fact,it is the first experience for them to face the barriers of life and stand on their own feet to solve their problems.furthermore,it is really regarding for society to have more educated person.for instance,the person who has dealed with all walks of people during his or her university time can achieve some special mutual understanding about his or her peaple .so , it is obviously the best way to know ourselves better and to live with respect to our society.
After all,from my point of view the university time is a big challenge for young people . thus, the fact that educational background is increased the chance of finding better job is undiniable. In the meanwhile, the other factors remarkably growth in the educational atmosphere such as: improving social network connections, being characteristically independent.
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