Description to correct My cellphone has 5 inches so it's quite big. It's silver and very modern. To protect it has a transparent cover. It has a 12MP camera and a frontal camera not so good. My mobile phone is quite thick and heavy but it is still practical.

Two short messages to correct Dear Kath It was very kind of you to give me some money. I'll buy animal shampoo because your cat fell in dirty water. I'll get some treats for him too. He's very naughty but we are having a good time. See you! Hi cousin! Thank you ever so much for the money. I'm going to buy a beautiful long dress to wearing it at my birthday party. Would you like to attend? It's very special for me that you come. Love

Essay to correct The statement says : As part of a school project I have to write about an important city in Spain. Which city should I choose? Can you tell me about this city? Dear friend, I live in Bonete that is a very beautiful town but in summer I spend almost all my time in Benidorm which could be more interesting to describe. Benidorm is a lovely coast city in Alicante, a province in the east of Spain. The town is quite large and very lively especially in summer, when a lot of people visit it. Benidorm is very important because it's the main tourist destination in hot seasons in my country. What's more it has a lot of skyscrapers, hotels, businesses, what makes it one of the most modern places in Spain. Is this information enough? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Ana.

How important is love in your life? Are you a romantic person? Love is a feeling necessary that everybody has and it's very important for us loving and feeling loved. But I would like to explain that romantic love isn't only in partners, you can love your work, your family, your pets, the nature, you can love everything or everybody and dream with it. On the other hand I think that the modern life, for example social networks, is changing the description of the romance because if you love someone it isn't necessary sharing it everyday. It's beautiful say the world that you are in love but not in excess. In conclusion I consider myself romantic (this essay is a clue of that) but I like that love wouldn't become artificial. Love is perfect and we mustn't destroy its natural essence because we would be losing a part of ourselves.

Essay to correct. Advantages and disadvantages of becoming a celebrity Nowadays benefits of becoming a famous person are a topic very dicussed. Everybody knows that when you become a celebrity your life changes but, how does it do? On the one hand, if you are a celebrity probably you earn very much money so some of your dreams will became true, for example having a beautiful house, travelling around the world... Moreover it's beutiful knowing that a lot of people love and admire you. On the other hand, celebrities have a lot of troubles. For example they miss being alone in the street, without cameras, without paparazzis. What's more they usually don't know when somebody loves them or loves their lifes, their fame. As far as I'm concerned I'm happy having a simple life, I know that my family and friends love me and they are enough so I wouldn't like to be famous.

ESSAY TO CORRECT. Help please. Roma Roma is a beutiful city capital of Italy that nowadays is one of the most visited places on the world. I visited it six months ago and I learn a lot of it. Roma is a historic city so you can see a monument in every street but it has a lot of modernities, vanguardist places, museums about recently history, etc. When I entered in Roma the first I thought was that it's cleaner than the most cities of Spain. People there are very helpful and kind and services are very good, for example and as far as I'm concerned, restaurants are very fast and their food is delicious. In conclusion, I would like to go back and discover more things about Roma, a lovely place.

ESSAY TO CORRECT: Everyone has the right to decide when and how to die? Nowadays, euthanasia is a much dicussed topic. I strongly belive that euthanasia must be legal because our body is the only thing that really belong to us therefore we should decide for its destinity. Unfortunately, sometimes our lifes became very difficult, cruel and painful for example if we suffer an accident or a fire. We can't imagine how tragic it would be if we can't walk, move, talk well, to be dependent forever. In these cases, I think that we aren't losing a life with euthanasia because a big part of his person died in the accident. What's more it would be a little selfish not to let a person get out of the pain. If a healthy person can comite suicide and we don't provide the means for, for example, quadriplegics to do it, victims would be limited again. In conclusion, euthanasia wouldn't be banned because to be owner of our lifes must be a fundamental right. We can't decide to be born but why can't we decide when we die?

What do you think about the independence of Catalonia? Nowdays the independence of Catalonia is a much discussed subject that people aren't aware of its possible bad consquences. I strongly believe that its independence would be a disadventage for Catalonia and Spain. Many Catalans feel as Spanish as I do, therefore separating from the country would be a social problem because we would be take away the nacionality of a lots people who want to continue living in Catalonia. What's more it would suppose a big cultural and economic lost. On the one hand Spain would lost, for example the Sacred Family Cathedral, a lot of tourism... And on the other hand Catalonia would lost commerce with the rest of Spain, the euro, the advantages of being in the European Union, etc. In conclusion, I wouldn't like that Catalonia get independece because it's a beautiful autonomous community and I love its culture and language. And as far as I'm concerned, it would become a personal problem because I have family and friends there and maybe it would be harder to visit them.