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IELTS - Writing Task 2 (Please give me feedback to improve my text)
TOPIC: Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is well known that lately people have been living much longer than in the past, on this basis some argument that people should retire from works much later. Of course the retirement age should be revised according to the life expectancy, but it must also be taken into account that people from lower social class usually live less than the wealthy ones.
As many people are living longer nowadays, there are more people retiring from work and they earn the pension for more time. It is obvious that the current rules for retirement are no longer economically sustainable, once soon the number of workers will be less than the retired people. Based on this expectation, the age at which people retire from work should be raised according to the life expectancy.
On the other hand, it is important to consider that poor people in general live shorter than the average for several reasons, such as hunger and disease due to the lack of sanitary conditions. Therefore, rising the retirement indiscriminately must affect directly this social group, thus the rules should be more flexible in order to include these people and offer them the needed conditions to survive. For instance, farm workers and any other worker who uses force in work should be retired earlier than the others, once in their later age they no longer have any capacity to keep working.
In conclusion, it can be said that the age at which people retire from work hate to raise, otherwise the economy will collapse, because soon it will no longer be sustainable. However the rules for retirement must be flexible enough to include people that will not have conditions to keep working in their later age.
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Writing task 2 - IELTS
"Write about the following topic:
There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words."
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Over the last decades the number of students at universities has been risen significantly. This increase has some positive aspects such as more people are having access to the university and thus it raises the general level of education, on the other hand the quality of education can be lowering.
There is no doubt that the growth of the number of students at university is an important step to building a democratic society, because it meas that more people with different backgrounds are having access to higher education, inclusive the ones from lower social classes, which is a novelty once the universities historically were frequented by the elite only. In addition, such increasing raises the general level of education, and thus it makes possible for people develop a critic thinking and have good discussions about any topic. Because at the university the students might be in contact with people from different cultures, religions and believes, sexualities and social classes, which is quite significant to the process of developing an open mind.
Nevertheless, the rise of the amount of students at universities has also some negative consequences, such as the drop in quality of education. There are universities that are not prepared to support the large number of students,which may overload the professors who in tern can not give the needed attention the students. Furthermore, in the near future there may be a lack of technical professionals, while the market will be saturated with people who have an undergraduate degree, therefore, these people will have to get lower qualified jobs.
In conclusion, the dramatic increase in students numbers in tertiary education is a positive and important step to building a democratic society, however the universities must be prepared to support all the members of the academic community, offering them good structure.
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Describing a bar graph
The bar graph gives an overview of the portion of people that were studying full-time or part-time in British further education over three decades. Overall, the number of both men and women in full-time education rose slightly between 1970 and 1990. On the other hand, the fraction of male part-time students decreased gradually, while the amount of women in the same regime had a significant increase.
According to the chart, in 1970 there were about 100 thousand British men in full-time education and others one million in the part-time regime. However, over the next thirty years, the number of those who were studying full-time has grown slowly, and in 1990 it counted just over 200 thousand. In contrast, the portion of those men in part-time education has fluctuated throughout the considered period, having a small fall by about 100 thousand of students in 1990.
When considering female students, it can be seen that the number of them in both types of education went up, although the rate of those that were studying part-time grew faster than the rate of female full-time students. The amount of women in part-time education has varied from slightly below 800 thousand to more than a million over that period, while there were about 100 thousand of female students in full-time education in 1970, and this number increased gradually to more than 200 thousand in 1990.
27 de julio de 2018
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Describing visual data from IELTS WRITING TASK 1
The chart gives information about the rate of using of radio and television by United Kingdom population along the day in 1992. Overall, it can be seen that the general radio trend was downward after the morning, whereas the television audience increased until the evening.
The percentage of people who listened to the radio had a rapid rise from 6.00 AM to near 9.00 AM, reaching a peak at just under 30 per cent. After that period, radio audiences gradually declined throughout the rest of the day, getting insignificant numbers from 2 PM.
In contrast, considering the proportion of people that watched TV, it rose with a little fluctuation between 6.00 AM and 3.00 PM, overtaking the radio fraction close to 1 PM, then it jumped to over 45 per cent at 8.00 PM. For the next six hours, the television audience had significantly decreased, and after 2 AM it remained stable slightly below 5 per cent.
26 de julio de 2018
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What is the difference between "get in", "go in" and "enter"?
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Este contenido infringe las normas de la comunidad.9 de julio de 2016
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Exchange the languages
Hello everybody, I'm learning English and I listen to music and watch films in English, but I can't practice a conversation because I don't have any partner. So, I would like to practice with someone who is interested to learn Portuguese. Would anyone like to practice with me?
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