This is my Ielts writing exercise, please give me some advice，thank you Topic-------“Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?” Nowadays, an increasing number of peoples are concerned about the environment problems. However, whether individuals could do something to improve the environment quality is a controversial issue. My view is that everyone of us could contribute for improve the environment instead of only depend on the government and large companies. First, it is obvious that we have liability to change the status quo of the environment. This is because a lot of environment issue were caused by all of us. So we should solve this problem together. Moreover, the behavior of the public could affect the decision of the government and the companies. For instance, it is well Know that the plastic bag is a main pollution resource and there are many plastic bag produced from the companies every year, but if we don’t use it anymore, when this kind of bag loss the market, the companies must reduce the production of them and this difference is made by all the citizens. That is not to say that we cloud optimize environment without the government and companies. Of course, they are the main power to improve the environment, but every individuals were the main power to decision what should the government and companies do. In sum, all of us could make a difference to improve the environment and every have this liability. Meanwhile, we can not ignore the functions of the government and companies, this is two powerful tool to fix the environment problems. By doing so, we can make sure that the environment maintain the high quality and this world will sustainable development.

Please help me revise this composition thank you soooooo much Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the significance of tertiary education. However whether the main purpose of university should be provide the job-related knowlege to the greduates is a controversial issue. My view is that the sake of universuty is provide graduates the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Firstly, it is obvious that the purpose of students to received education in collage is to find a decent job in workplace in the future. This is because most of graduates are faced with enormous stresses in the society, they need to earn a living and support their families, so, the particular skills is their real needs in university. Moreover, focus on the supply of the job-related knowedge also is a good method to keep the univerity follow the pace of the deveopment of the society. For instance, the Alibaba Group was marked a millstone in e-bussiness area and sparked massive interest in e-bussiness, if university focus on this area without delay and put more resources on this industry, the graduates o this collage will be more popular in workplace and this university also could keep pace with the world. That is not to say that the pure academic knowledge is useless, there are some stdent really need it to doing some research or study some area depth, maybe become a scientist in the future and do more contribution than others. But unortunately, this kind of graduates is far between. In sum, the main fumction of the university should be provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace, meanwile we can not ignor that the inportance of the academic knowledge, by doing so, university could maintain dynamic and sustainable development. (This is my Ielts writing exercise，please give your comment thank you sosososososmuch)

The main purpose of the university Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the significance of tertiary education. However whether the main purpose of university should be provide the job-related knowlege to the greduates is a controversial issue. My view is that the sake of universuty is provide graduates the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Firstly, it is obvious that the purpose of students to received education in collage is to find a decent job in workplace in the future. This is because most of graduates are faced with enormous stresses in the society, they need to earn a living and support their families, so, the particular skills is their real needs in university. Moreover, focus on the supply of the job-related knowedge also is a good method to keep the univerity follow the pace of the deveopment of the society. For instance, the Alibaba Group was marked a millstone in e-bussiness area and sparked massive interest in e-bussiness, if university focus on this area without delay and put more resources on this industry, the graduates o this collage will be more popular in workplace and this university also could keep pace with the world. That is not to say that the pure academic knowledge is useless, there are some stdent really need it to doing some research or study some area depth, maybe become a scientist in the future and do more contribution than others. But unortunately, this kind of graduates is far between. In sum, the main fumction of the university should be provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace, meanwile we can not ignor that the inportance of the academic knowledge, by doing so, university could maintain dynamic and sustainable development. (This is my Ielts writing exercise，please give your comment thank you sosososososmuch)

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