Please can you help me to check my essay) Essay: Technological development offers people more leisure time The 21st century is the time of technological progress. Although, many people argue that the development of technology offers people more spare-time. However, other human beings think that technological evolution does not supply leisure activities. I think that technological progress contributes to increasing free time. Firstly, In caveman's time, people did not have good tools. Therefore, they did not have free time, cavemen had to hunt and gather all the time. Now due to technological progress, we have much more free time, than cavemen had. Secondly, the purpose of technological progress is to save people's time. The industrial revolution helped people to do more things in a shorter amount of time. Thus, it created leisure time. However, there are a lot of people who think differently. they believe, that technology destroys free time. Moreover, technologies destroy hobbies and typical ways of enjoyment, which leads to a lack of free time. I respect other people’s opinions, but I cannot agree with them. Technologies create hobbies. Such as computer gaming and online education. Moreover, technologies help people to do things faster either work or spare-time. To conclude, technological development offers people more spare-time because technologies help to do things faster. this fact was proven by the example of the prehistoric era.

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