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To me, I think that many people are under stress in their life,so they need some violent game to relieve their burdens. Another reason is happiness. If they gain scores in their games or play with their friends, they will feel fulfillment from these violent games. I think that this is reason why violent games have become a hit among players.
I think that violent games may cause some social issue. The players who play these games would be more violent than other people, they may attack strangers or themselves.
In addition, these games will cause harmful to children who under 8-18 years old.Because their minds are not stronger enough to differentiate reality from virtue life. It is not appropriate for them to play these games.
Last but no least, many people will be addicted to it, and they will forget to eat or sleep. In the long term, it takes a toll on their physically and mentally health, what’s worst, they will die from tired or other health problems.
I saw many related cases from TV. This is a big issue that we need to deal with
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When I feel lonely(please check my sentence)
Everyone feel lonely from time to time. I am no exception. Sometimes, I feel lonely when I stay home alone because I likes to talk to other people. It is so quiet that I can only hear the sound of the clock. No one can talk to me, I cannot bear it at all. It almost drives me crazy.In order to overcome the loneliness ,I need to find something worthwhile to do.
The best solution for me is to read a novel.It can transfer my attention from loneliness to the stories of others.l was immersed myself in the imaginations,
When I noticed the time, an afternoon slipped away.
It helps me drive the loneliness away when I stay home alone. It is the best recreation for me to turn the lonely time into happy time.
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Graduation ceremony (am I correct?)
Graduation ceremony is a milestone of our life. Namely, it is the end of one stage of my life and the beginning of another.
After studying hard for years, we finally eared the diploma, it is a day for us to celebrate instead of just immersed ourselves in the atmosphere of sorrow.
All we can do is to express your gratitude to teachers and students whom accompanied you through the delight, sorrow, and meaningful time in school and value the last time in school.
Graduation ceremonies in differ from school to school.If I were in charge of this ceremony,I’ll hold it between formality and informality.
First of all, holding a dance party as starters, everyone can immersed themselves in this atmosphere of joyous.
After this, projecting a video on the screen, this is meant to let them memory their commonmemories in school, including the things they made together, the activities they attended together and the the games they played together.
And short time of principal delivering of a speech, we’ll sing the graduation songs as an end.
I guarantee it would be the most memorable ceremonies in the graduate mind.
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I learned something meaningful (Am I correct?)
After school. I went shopping with my friend. We were going to across the road and I saw the old woman walked slowly and carry lots of commodities. But the passerby didn’t notice the old woman.
I was going to help the old woman, suddenly, a young man helped the old woman cross the road. I can’t forget the beautiful moment of the young guy helped the old woman.
From this experience, I learned that there are many kind people around the world.
Although many people are indifferent about the things happened in their life, but still many people are enthusiastic about helping other people.
It is cheerful for me to become such a kindness person. We sometimes need other people’s help to face the setback in our life.Likewise, other people also need help, we should lend our hand to help them as those who helping us.
Taiwan’s beautiful t scene is people. I learned it from this thing. To make the world peaceful, wonderful, we should encourage ourselves to be a better person to help those who in need.
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Holding a community activity(Am I correct?)
If I have an opportunity to hold a community activity.
I would be apt to offer the assistance to the elderly. There are three reason about why I want to do it. First and foremost ,Taiwan is accelerated into the aging society, The population of who over 65years old is increasing rapidly.
Second, more and more teenagers are moved to the metropolis in order to gain better academic opportunities or work offers. Therefore, the elder who still dwell in their hometown would receive less care.
Third, I, living in the rural area, am observed the above circumstance in my hometown, this is an incentive for me to help them with my love and lend them a hand.
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Are designer brands good for young people?(am I correct?)
Designer brands are everywhere. It is a common observation that many young people are obsessed with designer brands because of its fashionable appearance and innovative technology.
It seems that it is here to stay. Though there are positive aspects, there are negative ones.
Many people are under peer pressure and under economic pressure.
In the beginning, many people in school are susceptible to there peers. Once they saw others purchasing something special, they wanted to follow.
More and more people do it and they will form a group. If you didn’t doing so, you may be isolated from their groups, be ridiculed, what’s worse, being bullied. It caused bad impacts on their relationship and the number of bully are increasing which is happened in school.
Besides many young people are usually buy these designer brands on credit due to its expensive prices.
If they purchase too much, they need to under the economic pressure every month. Therefore, many people have no option but to suicide because they can’t afford the pressure of these debts.
In conclusion, we should measure our abilities and think twice before we purchase to avoid above mentioned things happening. By doing these simple things, we can our shopping.
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The importance of learning dialects(am I correct?)
Dialects features a community‘a culture. However, under the globalization, many dialects are gradually dying out. It is time for to stand out in order to protect these cherish languages, because our literature, history, society and so on are expressed through the dialects.
Taiwan have more than ten dialects. As a Taiwanese person, we should understand the meaning of it, learn at least one of them, and passed it on.
As I little, my parents always talks with me in Hokkine
that I could understand what them say. Nevertheless, I discover that many friends around me can’t understand the Hokkine at all.
This things dawns on me that I should spread the importance of dialects to them and teach them how to speak and the meaning of it.
Dialects in Taiwan is a important cultural heritage to us, we should take the responsibility to protest it and pass it on to descendant.
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Managing your time (am I correct?)
”Time and tide wait for no man”. I didn’t realize the meaning of it until I did poorly on my exam.
I wasting a lot of time on sleeping or watching videos on YouTube that I didn’t finish my homework on time .Though take a break is good for our brains, spending much time on it turns these entertainment into guilty acts.
In order to make good use of time. I wrote down what I need to do on calendar and allocate morning and afternoon routine.
I strictly follow this plan to finish my daily routine and praise myself for watching videos after I finish all of things. After a week, I do everything on time. My life have never been so regular, my grades have never been so high and my hobbies have never been so guiltless. I realized the meaning of “time and tide wait for no man”.
Time is a valuable thing to cherish and everyone have twenty four hours each day, you can make the most of it if you managing your time wisely.
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Do you like shopping online ?(Am I correct?)
One of the greatest conveniences the Internet has to offer is shopping online. Just click the mouse, you can buy anything from around the world without stepping out of your home.
Beside, you can receive the commodities what you order within a week.Shopping have not been so easy.
I had my first shopping online experience when I was fifty. I want to buy a watch as my sister’s birthday gift. After browsing the Internet, I choose one at 30% off the retail price. I received it after I order within three days and I sent it to my sister. So glad was my sister that she open the box and wear it.
After this experience, shopping online has become one of my week routine.
If you not have a chance to shop online, what are you waiting for?
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The city where I lived? (Am I correct?)
Tainan, the city where I was born and raised. It is famous for delicious food, night markets and historical sites, which attracting many visitors around the world.So that is has another name called ancient capital. Despite so many advantages, it has a share of problems, such as air pollution or traffic violations. Below I will propose my suggestions in hope of dealing with these problems.
First of all, Tainan has many industrial areas illegally setting out lots of exhaust emissions.The government should keep tabs on it and make some laws to keep them from generating the exhaust emissions. Thus, our sky will be brighter, our body will be healthier, our environment will be cleaner. Except for this problems, the traffic violation is also a important thing to concentrate on. When we are riding, we need to wear safety helmets, follow the traffic signs and slow the speed.Besides, the government should enforce traffic regulations to protect our lives. To sum up, as long as we improve these problems, Tainan will be a good place to live.
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