The Negative Effects of Game Addiction_Body Paragraph 1 First of all, game addicts often feel that they have no time to do physical exercise. Playing online game requires plenty of time for users to achieve goals such as earning better items and enhancing their level. This time-consuming aims induce the addicts to focus to game whole day and make them inattentive to other time taking activities. At this point, exercise is usually omitted in overusers’ plan.

The Negative Effects of Game Addiction_Introduction Can anybody imagine that all minor people under 19 are not able to access online game officially? South Korea governments prevent teenagers from playing game at midnight. This shows the fact that authorities warn the harmful effects of highly excessive playing game. The reason that Falling into game addiction is problematic can be explained by these three effects: a lack of physical activities, alteration of brain function, and limit of social contacts.

A Brief Comparison between The Simpsons and South Park If a troublemaker want to arouse controversy, a following question can be effective. Which one is the best cartoon series, The Simpsons or South Park? These show programs take the highest rank in all kinds of lists of best cartoon series, but The Simpsons and South Park have not any resemblance. In this essay, finding out distinction between those TV animations with three points is the main purpose: target audience, language style, and satire differentia. First of all, The Simpsons and South Park are dissimilarly graded by the media rating system. The Simpsons can be viewed by audience who reached at 13 years old under their parental guidance. With a careful advice, the fact means that there are no abstruse issues to appeal to even young students. In contrast, teenagers under 19 forbid from watching South Park. Because this animation contains lots of controversial problems that make social and political arguments, minors who could not finish to forming a view of value can have a certain deflective opinion. Second, a style of language used in both cartoons shows quite different appearance. In particular, characters in The Simpsons use courteous and polite expressions generally, and the speed of speech is not as fast as news programs, so it is easy for viewer to feel relaxed. However, in the case of South Park, characters’ utterances are extremely violent, and speech speed of this cartoon is too rapid to hear even more than soap dramas. That can make viewer concentrate on conversation. Last, there are different degrees of satire in The Simpsons and South Park. In The Simpsons, the scriptwriters use euphemistic to avoid getting sued when they want to criticize celebrities or to parody certain scenes made from movies. Nevertheless, South Park writers don’t hesitate to ruin the reputation of the big names without circumlocution, and they uses even regional, racial stereotypes in every episode just for fun. In sum, tremendous gaps can be searched in The Simpsons and South Park. It is really hard to find single point of convergence between those show animations, but they give fun and inspiration to the fans in different ways. Eventually, even The Simpsons and South Park will meet the end someday as time goes by, but if they don’t lose their clear uniqueness, these TV animations will carry on their episodes as long as they have done.

paragraph - 1 There are significant problems in Korean education system. One of the problems is this ; the students in Korea cannot develop their creative thinking becauseof studying only for the test. In their school, Korean student don't learn about how to make it but they learn the answers only. They are forced to memorize everything except for Mathmatics that is the subject needed creative thinking with the systems of test unchanged. There could not be improvement of education system in this country. English subject, for instance, is a good example of this system's ugly side. The teacher in school don't teach the way of writing English even high school so if a person don't want to study him or herself, He or she will never write any single of a sentence with one's confidence even though that person has been learned about this foreign language at least for 9 years.

What is meant by "from one perspective" I can't understand it well. Does it have same meaning like " In a certain sense" ? What does "one" in the phrase exactly mean?

I want to know how to distinguish between "bravery" and "courage" These two words makes me really confusing :(

Pretty good Vs Good Which one have more strong feeling in complimentary about?

What is your most favorite sport and why? There are lots of fascinating sports in the world. Football, Boxing, Basketball and so on. Each sport have truly royal fans who couldn’t live without those. In my case, Baseball is it. There are two main reasons why I mad about it. First, I have got influenced on my farther. When I was kid, my father always said to me that go to see a Baseball game. Even I couldn’t figure all out the game, he explained each single situation to make my interest in it. Because of my father’s exertion, I became maniac about this sport. Second, Baseball is one of the most delicate and complex sports. It is not just simple throwing & hitting balls. There are many strategies to offend and to defend, and a lot of rules generate magnificent scenes diversely. Of course, I have more hundreds of causes why I like it, these two reasons can’t be separated with my Baseball

What do you think that the most different part between your language and Korean?
I just want to know about part the most differnt point you think , so studyng Korean makes
you hard.

It could be a word order, mechanism of vocabulary, exotic letters.... and so on

The most differnt point I think, comparing with English, is that my language rarely use a subject

to non-living thing, and all subject  must be used in every single sentence in English.

Why you guys always want to insert subject in every single sentence? I don't know :D