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My Trip to Beijing (Fictional)
Hi! Please help me correct my spelling and grammar. =) I have never been to Beijing but I have to write about it for my assignment. ^_^
曉雨, 你好!
你怎么样?
上个月我去北京了。我以前去过北京。我真的喜欢这个城市。北京是中国的首都。北京位于中国北部。我坐飞机去的北京,坐了十二多个小时。
在北京的时候我参观了故宫。故宫是很有趣的地方因为故宫里有很多漂亮的对象。
当我中国的时候我真的喜欢在夜市购物和吃中国蛋炒饭。不过我不恨喜欢北京的天气, 北京的天气太热!
但我还想去南京,可是时间不够了。
在中国的时候我很放松。所以我想再次去中国!
明年我打算去南京。你去过南京吗?。你想和我一起去吗?
回头见!
心美
二零一一年 九月二十八日
This is what I'm trying to say:
Hi Xiaoyu!
How are you?
Last month I went to Beijing. I have been to Beijing before. I really like this city. Beijing is the capital of China and is located in the north of China. I flew to beijing in a plane. The journey took 12 hours.
In Beijing I visited the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City is a very interesting place with many beautiful objects (or artifacts?).
When I was in China I really liked shopping at the night market and eating Chinese fried rice. But I did not like the weather, it was too hot!
I also wanted to go to Nanjing but I did not have time.
When I was in China I was very relaxed so I want to go again.
I plan to go to Nanjing next year. Have you been to Nanjing before? Do you want to come with me?
See you soon!
Xinmei
28 September 2011
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Thank you for your help!!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
你们好,我叫Hybrid。 我是因果人。 我喜欢学中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾电视。可是我的中文不好。今天我写中文assignment。这是很难 可是我喜欢学中文。谢谢。
再见。
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