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If it is possible could some one correct for me? Thank you for time and consideration and confirmation would be appreciated.
I was 10 or 11 years old when I heard the singing of my best friend Ameneh (she is my cousin and just 2 years older than me but she was not just my friend, she was like my teacher, she was very Inspirational I admired here a lot). I thought to myself how she sings nicely. I told her about her lovely voice and I told her I like to sing. I never thought I can sing like her because her voice is extremely beautiful for me. Ameneh recommended me to memorize the lyric first and then repeat it several times with caste (before there was a caste). From that time, I start to memorize Iranian traditional singing and practice singing with Ameneh. We sang with each other everywhere in nature, in a car, in-home, during washing dishes, etc. We get older and we sang with each other and I love her voice. Sometimes I preferred her singing and I just hear her beautiful singing because I love her voice. My best friend forever, “Ameneh” I love you forever even now that you are not alive. In each practicing “only in sleep” I cried. I miss you a lot. Many aspects of my life are influenced by you one of them is music (singing and playing piano). I am eternally grateful to you for everything and every think of you.
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If it is possible could some one correct for me? Thank you for time and consideration and confirmation would be appreciated.
I was 10 or 11 years old when I heard the singing of my best friend Ameneh (she is my cousin and just 2 years older than me but she was not just my friend, she was like my teacher, she was very Inspirational I admired here a lot). I thought to myself how she sings nicely. I told her about her lovely voice and I told her I like to sing. I never thought I can sing like her because her voice is extremely beautiful for me. Ameneh recommended me to memorize the lyric first and then repeat it several times with caste (before there was a caste). From that time, I start to memorize Iranian traditional singing and practice singing with Ameneh. We sang with each other everywhere in nature, in a car, in-home, during washing dishes, etc. We get older and we sang with each other and I love her voice. Sometimes I preferred her singing and I just hear her beautiful singing because I love her voice. My best friend forever, “Ameneh” I love you forever even now that you are not alive. In each practicing “only in sleep” I cried. I miss you a lot. Many aspects of my life are influenced by you one of them is music (singing and playing piano). I am eternally grateful to you for everything and every think of you.
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Day 29
Today is the end of the writing challenge. I understand I forget most of the grammar because I have not studied grammar for 6 years. I never think after 6 years without study my grammar becomes so awful. Thanks a lot to Barbara for this challenge. Now it is better to start study more books in English especially grammar books.
P.S. of Day 29
The reason that causes I chose diarrhea for my thesis was, I chose one of my teachers from my university for a supervisor and she accepted. She gave me some object to research but after 6 months she said “I couldn’t be your supervisor”. After 3 months I found a very good professor as my supervisor outside of my university. First, he asked me about my interest but my interest object was so difficult to work on it in Iran. He recommended the topics about diarrhea. I had to accept this topic because if I wanted another topic, maybe I couldn’t defend my thesis in time.
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Day 28
The worst thing I have ever done in my life was choosing my field/ major for university. I had to choose laboratory science instead of cell and molecular biology however I love my major. Lack of knowledge may lead you to difficulty and problems. I didn’t choose laboratory science because one of the things that I must do was a test on feces. I did not research the career prospects of the majors. If I choose laboratory science as my major the probability of having a job is 95% in Iran. I chose cell and molecular biology so I am unemployed. The funniest thing for a master's degree I had to choose to work on feces for my thesis. My thesis about the person who got diarrhea in the hospital because of antibiotic therapy. Antibiotic therapy and other reason cause, the body becomes less resistant to Clostridium difficile. C. difficile induced diarrhea. I collected 86 samples from the person who had diarrhea and testes on it.
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day 27
P.s. of day 22. My room was on the 3rd floor of the dormitory. The whole second semester my legs were in plaster and I was walking with two canes. Our dorm didn’t have an elevator so I had to go up the stairs to the 4th floor. Any person from the first floor or even the second floor didn’t accept to change her room with me just for a term. It was a really hard time.
I recently listened to the audio book of The Handmaid's Tale. In the first chapter When the narrator tells about her dormitory, I reminded my dorm. All windows of the dorm were fully covered by metal so any girls couldn’t connect with boys via windows, Therefore the room didn’t have enough light. There was a narrow line that couldn’t cover (The girls who had boyfriend connected with boys at nigh via this narrow line). We could be out of the dorm until 8 pm. The act of my supervisor was awful if you arrived dorm a bit late (even if you are with your mother). The most of dorm was apartment so they didn’t have a yard or small garden for playing, fresh air, sitting and looked at the sky when you sad and miss your family, etc. We had nothing for entertainment in the dorm just a TV for the 4th floor. We didn’t have even a room for study. Although we were under pressure of so ridiculous rules there wasn’t a rule for the time of sleep or at least the time that the girls did not make a high sound like shouted and scream, listen to music loudly and dancing. Totally, 4 years of bachelor's degree was the worst time of my life.
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day 26
P.s. of day 22. During of first semester of university, I thought about if really God exists or not. Although I was very confused, I almost accept that God not exists. When the doctor told me that your foot had to be operated on and the right foot might even be amputated due to the injury, the things that come in to my mind is God. The only one who could help me not to lose my legs was God. At that times I understand I the God exists and I really need God and also I need to I need to worship someone.
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day 25
Hafez was born 1315 and died 1390 in Shiraz. He is one of the well-known poets in Iran and around the world. His name was Khwāja Shams-ud-Dīn Muḥammad Ḥāfeẓ-e Shīrāzī, but because he memorized all Quran (holy book of Muslim) they called him Hafez (memorized in English). Most of his poem is lyric. Johann Wolfgang von Goethe was a German writer and statesman said that I inspired from Hafez for one of my work (Oriental Divan).
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day 24
When I came back from sight reading class, I picked some rosemary from the garden on the street (I use rosemary for cooking). As I was walking on the pedestrian, a dog approached me and sniffed me. it seemed that it didn’t let me go because it owner told it several times stopped sniffed her, but it didn’t pay attention. I don't know what did he think to himself that he went to the garden on the street and smell it then it came back to me and smell me then it went.
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day 23
Today I don't know why I have a lot of stress and also I have to do sight reading. With stress, practicing music doesn't work. I just translated a hemistich of a Farsi poem to English.
A person that thinks/mention you even when breath in/second. don't need anyone else
In our Literature and mystics believe that when you love people, It is accompanied by sweat sadness, so when I love you. I just want the sweet sadness of your love.
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day22
The first semester of my university finished. I didn’t like the university, my teachers, my dorm, my roommate, my classmate, etc. My university was completely different from the things in my mind and my dream. I tried hard to accept the university. I loved my major but I didn’t like my university. Several times I asked my father to let me leave the university to study harder than before to accept for next year in a better university but my father didn’t accept it. He said you have extreme stress couldn’t accept a better university. It was between two semesters so it was a very good time to refresh myself for next semester. The yoga class that I went to before university, had a trip for one day to the Sepidan for playing in the snow. My mother went to yoga class too so we decided both of us went to Sepidan with a yoga group and refreshed myself by playing in the snow. One of the people that I got familiar with her in bus and I went to tube riding on snow. Our tube stoped at downhill that other tube hit my tube at high speed. My tube spun around at high speed, a min I thought my head separated from my body but when the tube stopped I saw one of my foot deformed. My ankle wasn’t in the right position. I went to a hospital in Sepidan and the doctor said I had to come back to Shiraz. The doctor in Shiraz’s hospital said your foot had to be operated and your foot might be amputated due to the severe injury that had. After 2 hours of surgery when I recovered, I looked at my foot to see if I had it or didn’t have it. Fortunately, my foot didn’t amputate but after 18 years sometimes I had pain on my foot. About 2 years after the accident I couldn’t walk properly I did 110 sessions of physiotherapy. I consult with many doctors and thanks to God after 2 years I could walk properly with pain.
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