Please help me correct, thanks! Written Exercise 12－English Handwriting （英文书法） This is a picture of my English handwriting that I transcribed this afternoon. （这是一张我在今天下午抄写的英文书法的照片。） I admire those w

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Please help me correct, thanks! Written Exercise 12－English Handwriting （英文书法） This is a picture of my English handwriting that I transcribed this afternoon. （这是一张我在今天下午抄写的英文书法的照片。） I admire those who have beautiful English handwriting. （我羡慕那些写得一手漂亮英文字的人）. And I have been wanting to be one of them, so I started practicing mine by transcribing paragraphs from a documentary of BBC called South Pacific since August this year （我一直想要成为他们其中的一员，因此从今年八月份起，我开始以抄写BBC 的一个叫《南太平洋》纪录片中的段落章节的方式来练习我的英文书法。） As seen my English handwriting on the picture, is it easy to read? （从照片中看到我的英文书法，容易去看清楚吗？/容易去读吗？） What do you think of my English handwriting? （你觉得我的英文书法怎么样？ /你对我的英文书法有什么想法？） Thank you for reading! And It would be great if any of you kindly help me to correct my mistakes above.

5 déc. 2020 14:19

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Please help me correct, thanks! Written Exercise 12－English Handwriting （英文书法） This is a picture of my English handwriting that I transcribed this afternoon. （这是一张我在今天下午抄写的英文书法的照片。） I admire those who have beautiful English handwriting. （我羡慕那些写得一手漂亮英文字的人）. (1) I have been wanting to be one of them, so I have started practicing mine since August this year by transcribing paragraphs from a BBC documentary called South Pacific（我一直想要成为他们其中的一员，因此从今年八月份起，我开始以抄写BBC 的一个叫《南太平洋》纪录片中的段落章节的方式来练习我的英文书法。） As seen from my English handwriting in the picture, is it easy to read? （从照片中看到我的英文书法，容易去看清楚吗？/容易去读吗？） What do you think of my English handwriting? （你觉得我的英文书法怎么样？ /你对我的英文书法有什么想法？） Thank you for reading! And It would be great if any of you would kindly help me correct my mistakes above.

1. 不要用“And”开始句子。“But”是一样的。

5 décembre 2020

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