I Have Two Friends I have two frieds. One is short, and the other is tall. My short friend is fat,bald and ugly, but his girlfriend is beautiful. She has a black long hair and black

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I Have Two Friends I have two frieds. One is short, and the other is tall. My short friend is fat,bald and ugly, but his girlfriend is beautiful. She has a black long hair and black big eyes.Her skin is white. My tall friend is handsome, intelligent ang string,but his girlfriend is ugly.She has a short black hair. and samll eyes. Her skin is black.

3 déc. 2010 14:40

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我有兩個朋友

我有兩個朋友。

一個高的，一個短的。
我短的朋友旁，光頭，和丑，但他女朋友很美。他的皮膚很白。她的頭髮又長又黑和大黑色的眼睛。
我高的朋友帥，聰明，和強，但他女朋友丑。她的頭髮短、黑色的，她的眼睛小。她的皮膚是黑色的。

3 décembre 2010

I Have Two Friends

I have two friends. One is short, and the other is tall.
My short friend is fat, bald and ugly, but his girlfriend is beautiful. She has long black <strike>long </strike>hair and big black <strike>big </strike>eyes. Her skin is white.
My tall friend is handsome, intelligent and string, but his girlfriend is ugly. She has <strike>a</strike> short black hair and small eyes. Her skin is black.

a can of worms ....!

3 décembre 2010

I Have Two Friends

I have two friends. One is short, and the other is tall.
My short friend is fat, bald and not very handsome but his girlfriend is beautiful. She has a black long hair and black big eyes, and her skin is white.
My tall friend is handsome, intelligent and strong, but his girlfriend is not so beautiful. She has <strike>a </strike>short black hair, and small eyes, and she has black skin.

你的文法錯誤不多，我推薦一些更好的說法，比如說，我們一般不用‘ugly'，因為比較難聽。本人比較喜歡說“not so beautiful"或者”not very beautiful"。

“Her skin is black" 沒有錯，但我覺得”she has black skin" 是我們一般的說法

3 décembre 2010

谢谢您！我太感动了，他的话吓了我一大跳，我就像一个犯了错的孩子，不知所措。理解万岁！！！

14 décembre 2010

Lest you get the wrong idea, I think XiaoHei's comment, "Skin color is not something we are used to discussing in the English speaking world..."is his opinion alone and not the opinion of everyone in "the English speaking world." In my view, such criticism of another's attempt to learn a language is improper. I found nothing remotely offensive in your comments. There are many people who shy away from discussing matters related to race or skin color. Perhaps the reason is that they do not want others to think that they are prejudiced or biased. However, it's difficult to have a true exchange of ideas unless one is straightforward, frank and open.

13 décembre 2010

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