Studying abroad is one of my dreams. Unfortunately, I can't afford it now but, if I could, I would like to study psychology abroad. One of the reasons I want to study abroad is because I like to learn about other cultures. And, for me, it would also mean having an opportunity to learn and practice a new language. Language-learning is something I love. I'm not well-off, but I'm trying to work hard to earn more money. Sometimes it's hard to set aside money, because there are other important things I have to buy, such as food for my family.

Studying abroad is one of my dreams. Unfortunately I can't afford it now but if I could, I would like to study psychology abroad. One of the reasons I want to study abroad is because I would like to learn about other cultures and to me, it could also mean having an opportunity to learn and practice a new language which is something I would love to do. I'm not well-off but I'm trying to work hard to earn more money. Sometimes it's kind of hard to save money because there are other important things which I have to buy like food for my family and other stuff.

Studying abroad is one of my dreams. Unfortunately I can't afford it now but if I could, I would like to study psychology abroad. One of the reasons I want to study abroad is because I like to learn about other cultures, and to me, it could also mean having an opportunity to learn and practice a new language which ("witch" is the mean woman on a broomstick XD) is something I love. I'm not well-off, [1] but I'm trying to work hard to earn more money. Sometimes it's kind of hard to set aside money because there other important things I have to buy like food for my family and other stuff. 1. If you use and conjunction ("but," "and"...) to connect two independent clauses (full sentences with a subject and verb), you need to put a comma "," between the two clauses: I like going to the beach and playing with friends. (no comma, because "playing with friends is an dependent/incomplete clause with only a verb (playing) but no subject) I like going to the beach, and/but I also like playing with friends. (comma, because "I also like playing with friends is an independent clause with a subject (I) and verb (like)) This is advanced grammar, but worth knowing :) Also try reading this to understand "run-on sentences" (sentences that are too long), which is a mistake you often make: https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/grammar/runonsentences Very good written English!