A monkey recognized a puppy as her baby embracing the puppy and jumping on the high branch. The puppy was too scared to move . The monkey was confused why the tourists noticed her and who they laughed at . Motherly love is the greatest. It even could extend to other breeds.
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A monkey mistook a puppy for her own baby, embracing it and carrying it up to a high branch. The puppy was too scared to move. The monkey was confused about why the tourists were watching her and laughing at her. Motherly love is the greatest. It can even extend to other species.
Level: B2/C1.
Your writing is clear and tells the story in an engaging way. You also express the final idea effectively. The main corrections involved natural collocations, sentence structure, and choosing the right word for animals from different species. Good work! 😊
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A monkey recognized a puppy as her baby, embracing the puppy and jumping up onto a high branch. The puppy was too scared to move. The monkey was confused as to why the tourists were staring and laughing at her. Motherly love is the greatest. It even can extend to other species.
Well done. An interesting topic and nice writing.
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