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Marcelo
Hi, this is an essay from the B2 that i would like for someone to correct ;)
i: Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment. Do you think these problems can be solved?
Notes: transport, river and seas, forests
The world is now facing one of the limits the earth has to resist the climate change and pollution problem. Thanks to the technology we humans have created, we can know that by 2030 if we continue our destructive behavior towards the environment, we will be destroying the ecosystem as we know.
CO2 emitions, not only produced by transportation and industries, but mainly at cattle raising, are responsible for this. This last activity has to stop as soon as possible, because there is a great chance that we ran out natural resources due to an increment in the temperature, which has been rising the past 10 years non-stop.
Not only we have diminished half of the worlds green areas, but the seas have more plastic than a Lego store.
We are at a breakpoint, the only way we can it is through change, awareness and action are a must. The road is not simple, but the animals, seas, trees and even our neighbors and family depend on our commitment.
2021年8月31日 15:08
Marcelo
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英語, フランス語, ポルトガル語, スペイン語
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フランス語, ポルトガル語, スペイン語
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