Could you correct these sentences? Thank you so much! I was born and raised in Japan. After graduating from high school, I took an HSK exam. I scored only 100 out of 300. Once I too was a beginner, just like you. While a beginner, I tried a variety of approaches to improve my Chinese skills, but I faced many setbacks along the way. However, I persisted and ultimately achieved fluency. In my class, I would like to share with you the ways in which I improved my Chinese abilities. I will strive to be a perfect language buddy, one who enables you to improve your Chinese proficiency.

Could you correct these sentences? Thank you so much! I was born and raised in Japan. After graduating from high school, I took an HSK exam. My score was only 100 out of 300. I also used to be a beginner just like you. When I was a beginner, I tried a variety of ways to improve my Chinese skills but I faced many setbacks in Chinese learning. However, I made a lot of effort and finally achieved fluency. In my class, I would like to share with you how I improved my Chinese abilities. I will do my best to be a perfect language buddy to improve your Chinese proficiency.