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Good morning. Today is the hottest day ever. Just walking to go to school makes me sweat and I'm about to collapse. In addition, there was a live show nearby today, so there were a lot of people. I have an English test now, so I'll do my best. After this test, it's summer vacation. I want to split watermelon in the summer
2026年7月20日 04:13
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Good morning. Today is the hottest day of the year. Just walking to school makes me sweat, and I feel like I'm about to collapse. In addition, there was a live concert nearby today, so there were a lot of people. I have an English test now, so I'll do my best. After this test, summer holidays will finally begin. I want to split a watermelon this summer.
Level: C1.
This is a clear and engaging piece of writing. You describe the heat, the crowded streets, and your feelings naturally, and your ideas flow well from one sentence to the next. The corrections were mainly idiomatic expressions and British English vocabulary rather than grammar. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026年7月20日 09:45
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